All Comments on 'Jon's Punishment'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Over the top .....

Ridiculous .

There are plenty of other women out there , apart from Miss Perfect .

She is nothing special .

Her actions prove that .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
self punishment

Interesting to note that you designed this entire punishment yourself. Interesting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What ugly and poor story!

The author did a very poor job on this pathetic story. In fact it seems the author has some serious gay issues that were transported to this bad story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context and it isn't even hot nor sexy story. This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

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