All Comments on 'Jordan's New Life Ch. 01'

Great start to your story please keep it going

is it incest if he was adopted and they're not related by blood?

Keep going!

Sounds like your normal every day white teenager

Nice start

So they picked up a random guy to adopt from a random orphanage?

Sorry for the confusion guys! I forgot to mention the story develops into a full blown incest story in the next few chapters!! Also, there are step parent and step sibling stories labeled incest so I figured it was all good! Stay tuned!!

Way too short man, come on

Haha this "anonymous" motherfucker thinks it's too short huh? Godd for you bud!

I'd like to thank the rest of you for commenting questions or encouragement! I'm not machine and this is my first go! Hope you all stay for the ride!

Liked the story but it's not incest if their not blood but keep going any way 4 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!

“OK, shit, my bad!! I need to go back a bit and give you the whole story!“

This is how an idiot writes when he thinks he’s being clever. God dammit it’s so stupid.