All Comments on 'Josh Meets Carmen Pt. 01'

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SaraSeraSaraSera12 months ago

More…much more please.

eomersoneomerson12 months ago

Good start. Looking forward to see where this goes. From the start we have some good branches of the story to develop. Dont let the story stop. (and dont listen to trolls!)

KatiwantsKatiwants12 months ago

Wonderful start!! I hope there will be more!!

nutcase666nutcase66612 months ago

Love this good start looking forward to more

Danielle_CD58Danielle_CD5812 months ago

Wow, I love this story. Please keep it up. Keep them both so real too.

Michell408Michell40812 months ago

You got a great story going and absolutely loved the beginning hope for more

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

My panties are wet just thinking about where you’re going to take this story. I love Josh and Carmen already! I can’t wait for Part 2!

MaryFrancis36MaryFrancis364 months ago

Read the whole thing in record time. Great story!!!

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