All Comments on 'Journey to Year 1,000,000,000 Ch. 22'

When I thought what else can happened, you have surprised me once again. Human nature, go figure! Love it, as always!

Thank you.

My 2 cents

I really enjoy your story. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Now that I have read your last chapter, I would like to thank you for a wonderful Science Fiction story.

I like the story - I really do!

But I really don’t understand, that Taylor so willingly coupled with Elisabeth, original Pam and the mother/sister - and he was NOT changed by future Pam?!

He just couldn’t resist the women, even though he was not changed? In my opinion thats TOO much of a plothole. He’s too weak - after showing us through many chapters, how strong his mind otherwise is!

But… looking forward to the next chapter, even though this chapter was difficult to finish due to the toecrumpling plothole (imo)