All Comments on 'Joy, Pain, and All Between Ch. 07'

by LilMami07

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kymommy30kymommy30over 14 years ago
LOVED IT!

That was a amazing chapter ! Can't wait untill the next one! I love this story!

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 14 years ago
beatdowns to the left of me beatdowns right of me

Loved it, keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice Mami

i am so liking on this story no matter where you take it

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Damn, that was fun

Stupid Joel.. shoulda let Skyler smash Britz bitch ass. Hope Skye & Lacey tag-team her on the down low without ol' He-Man running interference. Bring it on

theonlinestalkertheonlinestalkerover 14 years ago
GREAT!

As always. You made my rapidly sad day so much better. : D

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent!!

Britanni got what she deserved and so did Mikeal. I hope Joel and Skyler make a go of a relationship. Hopefully they will overcome anything Britanni throws their way.

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 14 years ago
Loved It!!

This update was great. Everybody got exactly what they deserved. Unfortunately, I think Brittani is going to be more trouble than she is worth but at least Mikeal got his ass whooped. Thanks for the update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WHOOP DAT TRICK!!

I am over here jumping around and making sound effects!! OMG! LMAO!! this was good as hell...whooaa!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

catman71catman71over 14 years ago
perfect

the fact the gealen calmly picked up mikeal and then beat him down was perfect in that i have done that for a girl who i was great friends with and i was not the last one to do it, and as for brittani lace should have had a lick or two

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
RAW!

Fight scene - Gaelan is too Funny!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome

That was awesome and hilarious. A two for one ass whoopin'. Thank you I only asked foe Mikeal to get tore off, so Brittani was a bonus. I know that crazy heifer ain't through yet can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't be a stranger.

Oh yeah got to do something about Lacey and GaeLean.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well....

The story in interesting but all the fighting is a bit too much.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOalmost 13 years ago
No...

What does violence ever solve, now everyone is going to be hurt if just for a little while. When life comes back at you with what you give out, most people can't take it.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Love a fresh can of "Whup ass"....just the best.....no doubt!!!!

One can never beat the pleasure of a freshly opened can of "Whup Ass" and my peeps went and opened two cans. Hot damn...sure felt darn good!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Weird

There might as well have been space ships and yellow pigs thrown into this fictional mess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More, More

Keep going very good!

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