All Comments on 'Judge Sandy Ch. 01'

A very good start! I'd really like to see where you take these two! Thank you!

Great story with a good plot, action, paperwork, conversation, showers, and then a very good sex scene.

At least three more submissions to get trough this story. Great start!

Meh. Was ok. Not as good as some of your other works.

Good start. The difference in their height should have become apparent in their sex but apparently not.

A smashing incident of two attackers on a single woman, and a rapid response to a military-trained male with considerable skills. The police investigation was standard and followed the proper protocol The drive to her home. The checking of the house is a standard operation procedure. Sandy being forward with Brandon was not unexpected and led to making out with kisses, and fondling, his focusing on her breast was in keeping with the mature theme. Her orgasms so early were not expected, but it's keeping with the plot. A well done opening chapter.