All Comments on 'Judicial Punishment Lottery Pt. 02'

I love where you're taking the story. Can't wait to read more. I guess I could say Let's just see what happens.

Well done! Good writing and a compelling story. I enjoyed it very much.

brilliant series of a story hopefully develop into a longer series maybe one or two nurses end up visiting the center.

Absolutely brilliant.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

Tess (uk); if I may I would invite you to send me an email via the member biography. The reason I ask is you made a comment on a story a while ago regarding BDSM. Now the next chapter of this story that I'm writing (chapter 4) may have an aspect of BDSM or similar involved and I'd like your input regarding character motivation, as opposed to any physical aspect. I confess I don't actually know anything about this scene and I would really appreciate your input (I was intrigued by that previous comment). Obviously, if I'm overstepping by asking this then I apologise.

Another excellent chapter, usually I prefer Male Dom situations but this is extremely interesting and imaginative, making for great reading.

good

Agree with Gym52. Great read.

Another enjoyable chapter. apparently you are left with only pope that enjoy thoughtfully crafted plots and story lines. It looks like all that food they ordered might have gone to waste. :-)

Looking forward to what comes next