All Comments on 'Jules 13 - Office Games'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story and good writing. Like the autonomous personality and the fact they merged. Is there only one sub person or will more emerge: a dominant or a kinkster? The balance of action is good; there are plenty of illustrated sex manuals and not enough mind stuff. Remember the mind is worlds best sex you. Finally, find your own “J” and let her lead you down the rabbit hole. mXa

MigbirdMigbirdabout 1 year ago

You ask for input going forward at the outset of this last chapter. Well, thoroughly enjoyed Jules, especially moments with J her alter ego you might say — those moments so well crafted. Liked the introspection/tension/angst, so not more Jules yet a piece that tackles wrestling within self over sexuality or say the tension between lust and love. Actually anything that comes to mind; you are the one with the vivid imagination. Thanks for sharing.

Hani407Hani407about 1 year ago

Great story, you should go on with these characters but i like when Jules get humiliated and was horny from that but wasnt 100% happy about it you have that figuerd out perfectly in previous stories. Love to get more of her humiliation and exhib. with Kim as kind of what J was seting tasks and laing ground work for Jules dares :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Kim and J.

Please continue to test Jules' limits, but keep the story from going dark.

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