All Comments on 'Julia, An Exploration Ch. 01 Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Keep Writing

NIce hook, now you need to follow up with her development as an exhibitionist. Lots of possibilities for sure so explore and keep it mostly realistic :-)

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I have been working on my story lines. I am new to the publishing part and could use some feedback. I am looking to see if my stories have enough interest to go forward. I would enjoy meeting a woman that likes my stories and wants to record them in her voice.

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