All Comments on 'Juliana Jones and the Emerald Fist'

Nice bit of tension from start to finish. When does the movie come out? I know I'd pay to see it. Well done!

5 Stars!

Too short IMO, as is often the case with 750 word submissions. There are exceptions. Interesting but unsatisfying to me.

Intriguing setting/scene needing so much more to appreciate characters and storyline. Liked it for promise otherwise .., ,

Very much in keeping with the movies - loved it. Especially the location name 🤭 Emily

Em - it does seem like your kind of place, doesn't it?

I felt like I came into a movie half way through and then the projector broke. So much action and excitement. The feeling of being there and watching was palpable as I scrolled down the page. Oh, wanting more.

Boring

I was expecting a sex story that got swapped out for an adventure story! Well done and well written! Classic pulp.

Great for what was there but where's the next part?