All Comments on 'Julie & Daddy Step Out'

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GayleypooGayleypooabout 18 years ago
wow!

This is hotter than the last!

Hope the story continues!

topcattoponetopcattoponealmost 5 years ago
Good story....

....but. There is a disconcerting switch from third person to second person in the middle which spoils the effect somewhat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please stick with one perspective. At first I was reading about two people and next thing I know I’m being told what “I” did. Spoiled the whole story.

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