by Pretty_Sissy_Julie
There was a reason Becca always teased dad. Sister's and mother's bedroom provide a wealth of knowledge. Please continue with this beautiful story.
This is Julie. If you wish to contact me direct, I am at julieaugust72@gmail.com
Good start to this story and for more chapters , * keep being detailed and also dialog as well , which will drive your story.
With erotica, getting the mixture between character detail and the openly erotic is often difficult. This author achieves this balance perfectly, giving enough detail to make the erotic pats of the story have a vivid impact. The characters and situations are vividly depicted, and elements of for-shadowing are nicely slipped in. Well done!
Ms. Julie, looking forward to Becca training her new Sister in the "womanly" wiles and ways for hur Dad. ;-) Excellent pace and dialogue.
Wow I'll certainly read the rest lol I love a good sissy incest *sighs*
this is fabulous. I enjoyed the story line and could tell you were recounting events and memories within your story, that is what makes it so good. I am excited to keep reading
This is Becca. I had forgotten a lot of how Julie and I first got started. If you have not already done so, please read some of my stories as well. Julie got me started on writing and I love it now