All Comments on 'Julie Finds a Side Hustle Pt. 03'

I did enjoy it. Thank you. I noticed you left the door open for more someday. It’s up to you but I would like to read more. But again, thanks for sharing what you have.

Great writing with a lot of sensitivity!

But now for a criticism. It might have been better to stop after story 2. The third felt contrived. While everything about the first two felt drawn from the range of the possible, the third part did not. When you like your characters it’s hard to let them go but sometimes it’s best to move on and explore your ideas with new characters in new settings.

That said, you’re an excellent erotic writer. Carry on!