All Comments on 'Julie's New Houseboy Ch. 03'

by motoskoota

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Longo_AfarLongo_Afaralmost 5 years ago

It is so hard to find good help, and good stories, these day. This one is definitely a keeper.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Excellent!

ZakfarZakfarover 4 years ago
Last 2 chapters mediocre.

First chapter was good. It was fast and quick to the point. In chapter 2 and 3 you slowed up the progress for no reason. She's a dominant, and he's a submissive. They both know it. They both want to explore the depth of D/S relationship. But she's holding to forward it for no reason.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Jeez Louise , What’s With The Critic??

Nice story—I’m all for the long tease—keep it going.

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