All Comments on 'Julie's Threesome'

I know stories exaggerate the ease of orgasms, but this chick cums from giving oral, being kissed, and being hugged. geezus

There were a LOT of typos. Work on description rather than describing actions in order of occurrence. Do it in Word or something and it will find the typos for you.

Wooden. I don't think I've ever read a more uptight sex story. Use contractions, please, please, please use contractions.