All Comments on 'Jumping Him'

Lovely couple!

5

That Ed Sheeran reference, the worst plagiarist in the history of music (saying something) really detracted from this.

Basically one long lust and sex filled story with a discussion about love. Not really my kind of story I need a story with a real plot or a good romance and I'm old enough to not vote on this story because I have never had a relationship anything like was described here. I guess it was probably good as eroticism goes but I have no frame of reference except one failed 13 year marriage and one loving marriage of almost 40 years with some pretty vanilla sex compared to what is written here. So thanks anyway, I'm sure some others enjoyed it.

I think some folks don’t realize that this should be part three of Her Private Dick. I loved the whole series and think you should consider continuing their adventures. Think about it please. You write it and I’ll keep on reading. Thanks!

Odd that the next chapter of a Romance story is Erotic Coupling. Normally, it would be the other way around. I skipped past the sex and was disappointed that the story wasn't advanced any further.

I understand that I'm not the author, and, 'If you don't like it, write something yourself!' But, I'm trying to provide constructive feedback. The premise to the series was great, and the storyline was interesting. I enjoy the story portion of Romance entries over the actual sex scenes.

Thanks for your hard work on this series.