All Comments on 'Jumping Into the Deep End'

SO much better than the garbage that's been floating thru the LW section lately. The only thing I would have liked is a little more detail on their divorce. Did they sell the house? Does he pay alimony? Who's paying for Nathan's education? Did Hank get screwed in his divorce? Twice a month is better than nothing but still not much. Is he dating? A little more information would have been nice. This was still a good read.

4 stars

Good story.

Repeatedly throwing the mother in the pool did make me laugh.

I liked that he called her out on the "don't you care about 25 years of marriage?". The simple fact was that she cared so little for their 25 years together that she willingly risked it all multiple times for some strange cock.

Nice BtB.

Fun story and I laughed at the constant dumping into the pool. What was missing as someone pointed out was a bit more detail around the divorce as in who got what. Also time line wise I was a bit confused. She met Hank at a wedding and then they met just two more ties I think. What's that time frame as the husband was tipped off then got an investigator then was in a bad mood for about three weeks? So did this all happen in a few weeks time or did she just meet Hank once a month for three months and how long did the investigation last?

In effect it was her son Matt who she hurt the most? The impacts of infidelity are often more than you'd think. A good story.

Thanks for the semi light hearted story.

The pool treatment got me laughing!

I would love to see more of this one. I would like to see how she was planning on resolving the problem she created.

Hoping for more and a sincere thanks for the laughter!

I love a happy ending to a cheating story. Married happily 46 years with no suspicion of my wife cheating (I never let my guard down), I'd walk away today if I she winked at another man or if I discovered a past event.

The anons who are being critical need to lighten the fuck up.

Have a good day if you can get out from under the bridge long enough.

Hey I just got married but let's see who else is around I can fuck. Also if Sharon gave it up that easily I'm sure it wasn't the first time. Sounds like an opportunity cheater.

You're such a good writer!!

Thoroughly enjoyed this. Mistakenly entered four stars. Meant to put five.

Mega kudos.

WindySwimming

Enjoyable tale with a far amount of humor for a situation that is just heartbreaking. Can't believe the wife cheated with her best friend's husband to be at their wedding. Talk about stupid and just plain low brow. Nice change of pace to see the kids pissed off with their mom and her behavior. Usually, they take the mom's side and try and convince their father to take her back just because they've been married a long time. Putting in time does not a good marriage make and obviously she thought so little of her husband and their marriage that she thought cheating was acceptable thing that she should be forgiven. Would she have been forgiving if the role was reversed and the husband had been the one that cheated? I think not and even if she was to take him back she'd emotionally beat and berate him for his transgression for the rest of their marriage. Better to divorce and move on then stay in a crappy marriage. Also, pretty sweet that the daughter was looking out for her dad and was hooking him up with a nice friend with benefits.

How the initial bathroom encounter between Sharon and Hank became sexual is a mystery to me. Walking in on someone coming out of the shower could be hot but interrupting the activities that people eating and drinking at a party need to do in the bathroom would not be an erotic situation for most folks.

Otherwise this is fine story is an auspicious start to the DTB tradition. His singing indictment of the adulterous pair at the party was great. With he help of his sorta grown up kids, Chris handeled a difficult situation about as well as anyone could.

Thanks for sharing your work here, m&m. Hope to read more soon.

That was so funny splash a 5, thanks for the read made my coffee go in windpipe from laughing .

thank you sir. I see your name and know I am going to be entertained and usually smiling. 5*

Good romp - I would've liked more on what was going through her mind (you did a little) and whether she really felt remorse. Had she done it before? Your writing left us with a feeling she was only sorry she was caught. How did he catch her with only 3 encounters? (I get he got a tip from friend, but how did investigator get proof in such a short time?) All good in the end, just some thoughts on future stories...

That was fun! I loved the image of Sharon getting tossed in the pool whenever she crossed paths with her son. We all live with the consequences of our actions and she might have had a chance at reconciliation if she had been a good deal more repentant at the start, but in this case I doubt it. I do hate a cheat, but public humiliation is a better revenge than violence. You don't go to jail for humiliation. The nail gun was a nice touch.

Always enjoy the tale!

This was well written! Plain to see who had the respect in the family.

She screwed the groom at the wedding - like no one noticed he disappeared??

She only was with him 3 times - how did the hubby find out and have time for a PI?

Her office friend - only married 6 months and he cheated at the wedding - nothing noticed by the new wife?

Here office friend had the pull to get her fired? Her Boss? Didn't that enter into her thoughts screwing her "office friend maybe bosses husband" ...

Serious time/plot line holes to me. Don't get me wrong, I loved the story - the pool was a great metaphor for how the boy felt. Loved that part.

Awesome story. Hubby is lucky to have great kids.

Don't misjudge a small womans ability to give a massage. With leverage & body mechanics, they can put a hurtin' on you.

ltpw

Thanks for the fun.

Loved the Last Paragraph! Sounds like something my Friends Might do!

Splish Splash Sharon was taking a bath

The partytime 'reveal' was original, as were the kids sundry reactions, but Matt's continuous dumping the whore into the pool is destined to become a new classic.

Lots o' fun, M&M. PLease k eep 'em coming.

like matt so cool and fun ,what he did for mommy.

Great story! I am amazed at the way you continue to find new ways to tell old stories. I love the entire family's reaction to Sharon's cheating. The children were great and the husband's cold, we are done attitude was perfect. If course she's sorry now, but it's too late. Extra points for dealing harshly with Hank. Again,Norway story.

That was fun!

Don't quite get the pool thing.

Silly me, I thought sluts liked to get wet.

Now to check the yellow pages.

Masseuses that only charge respect .....

Top ratings from me, of course.

Good story!

5

Matt made the day 😂😂😂😂😂

Loved the swimming pool connection! Instead of BTB this one is Dunk The Bitch.

Playing Devils advocate here, Chris out of respect for the first 24 years should have told Matt to cease after the forth or fifth time, after that Matt is going to have no respect for any woman in the future.

As for Hank, how did he know to follow Sharon in the first place, was he stalking her even at his wedding? He deserved more than just a few nails.

Last, with the help of Lynette, he was doing to his marriage the same thing Sharon had done, only a lot more times. I didn't read anything about counseling which is almost mandatory unless Chris was willing to give up a lot in the divorce. No Judge will give everything to the husband over three times.

Heeyyy ...paybacks really are a bitch .....

Ain't they ...😉😉😉😉😉 ...

I know this is fiction but I just have a hard time getting through stories when the children are such active participants in a marriage break up. The pool stuff is funny, I assume Matt will spend the rest of his life living like a saint and never do anything wrong but if he does anything it's in the pool for him! So yeah stuff like that is a major distraction in the story, at some point everyone needs to get on with their lives, I think the Mom should have done anything at that point to move out or maybe spray the little shit with some Mace. Sorry, I guess I deserve a toss in the pool too! ;-)

...great job. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

its nice to see dad backed up

Air nailer was a nice touch!

5* Revenge by weaponizing the kids, pool-dumping, and the nail gun. These are the first time revenge tools in LW.

Awesome!

You packed a lot into such a short tale, thanks - it was quite enjoyable.

5/5

Short and sweet

well written, funny, and I liked it.

Nitpickers would have been nitpicking the the story for all the nitpicks that they claim fell short if they had been included in this story.

You read that line anywhere else on this site and you'd never guess he'd just throw her in the pool again. Very amusing part to an enjoyable story. Thanks

Being disabled I took to reading loving wives tales but I have never in 20 years of reading have run across a tale so amusing and so well written in this gentry. I was in stitches every time Matt was near his mother. Excellent story line and well written completely enjoyed it. keep up the good work.

"Hard to trace 16D framing nails." And "Matt can't be trusted around Sharon." I have an ex-wife that I would enjoy throwing into the swimming pool ten or twelve times and a neighbor I would like to nail against the wall, then paint over.

Thank you Matt for making me laugh.

I’ve read this before. I must have been in a really shitty mood, because I only gave you a two . Here, I was prepared to give you a five. You were a man, the kids shared your contempt for her actions and it was pretty humorous. Really, five stars.

Well done. Interesting story line, good characters. Fine conclusion.

While the divorce was going through it’s process he was still married, so he’s allowed to cheat but the wife isn’t. Irrelevant that he’s filed, until the final decree the marriage is valid, hypocritical much?

Was she wrong? Absolutely. But his actions were equally distasteful, descending to the same level as her shows his character in a morally ambiguous light.

Still it’s nice to see a husband and wife teaching their children the value of moral turpitude.

No criticism of the writing, well thought out and executed but the content is a little meh!

For the read.

Once the contract is broken it is void and no longer applies. Just markings on a paper.

What?!? Are you the divorce police Ken or is it Karen? I guess when you write your first story and post it, you can include all those fine points. She broke the verbal and formal contract when she cheated. This released him from said contract. Calling him hypocritical is hypocritical indeed. Oh, and since you seemed not to notice this is fiction, none of this is real. So no real individuals were hurt or splashed in the writing of this story. 🙄

Sharon cheated and then Chris cheated. How are they any different??? She is scum and now so is Chris...

"I don't know how you can be so emotionless. This is ripping me apart." - He already had his emotional breakdown when he found out about her cheating.

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@dmann, The divorce has been filed and is just going through the process. I've seen stories where the guy won't fuck until the divorce is final, which is ridiculous.

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@skruff101 - See above. No hypocrisy needed; she can also fuck whomever she wants now!

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For what it's worth, I asked my wife, and even she agrees, that once a divorce is in progress, sex with others isn't cheating. Heck, she even thinks that a separation is good enough!

And @sbrooks103x, with all due respect to your wife, I am pretty sure that having sex while married counts as adultery even after a divorce is filed or while there is a legal separation. Whether it's "cheating" in a moral sense is a different story. There, your wife may well be right.

The only thing worse than an air nailer putting 16d nails in your foot would be the claw hammer pulling them out !! Of course I wouldn't care for the pool either (can't swim). Like the story though, seems like Matt has a one track mind! Thank you.

somewhere east of Omaha

So the kiddos fixed dad up with a slut. Lovely family.

Were it me, about the third time he came to throw me in the pool, I’d show him the pointy end of a .38. Shun me fine but I won’t be laid hands on unless you have a badge.

What a fucked up mess. She should have grabbed a frying pan an knocked the shit out of her son, then kicked him on the nuts!

Took a bit to link the title to the story but multiple tosses in the pool cleared it up.

As always a good job relating the depth of hurt from the betrayal.

Love the son tossing her into the pool .

Really brought the story home .

Five stars

Just more of the same tired BTB crap. Our “hero” once again demonstrates that women are completely disposable. They’re so smart and clever that they can carry on affairs while fooling you completely, but otherwise they’re so stupid that you can easily outmaneuver them at every turn. You can even get the children they raised to turn on them and throw them away.

I hope I never live next-door anybody like this. I’ll probably have to shoot him…

Ha Ha Ha

You know what a load is? You, ruttweller. You are a fucking idiot. Actually, a fucking troll.

What did the cheating wife expect, hearts and flowers? Fucking asshole lover got his, also. The best part was the son constatly throwing her in the pool. No amount of soap and water will clean the cheater.

Great tale. Keep 'em coming.

Five Stars

Great story in the great moreandmore fashion.

I am amused by the handle you have chosen. Betrayed by love. Because, of course, love owes you. The world owes you. If you don’t get what you want, it’s someone else’s fault.

It amazes me how many men like you on this site wrap victimhood around themselves like a comforting cloak. They consider a relationship with a woman to be a matter of ownership. They don’t have to invest themselves into the relationship anymore, they got married, so now the bitch owes them eternal devotion.

You scream “wimp” at men who display flexibility and understanding in a marriage. You expect instead that violence, cruelty and hatred are the appropriate responses towards the person you claim to love the most. How shallow is love that disappears in a flash, as if it were never really there?

Women can tell when a man has a monster living inside of him. Why would they want to stick around for that? No wonder you can’t hang on to a woman. You’re unlovable.

Your chosen handle is a lie; you have never truly been in love. Your idea of love is that someone owes you, not that you actually care about someone’s well-being independently of what you can get from them.

Enjoy your tiny hate-filled life! Wimp.

Great story, good to see a husband with balls ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

quite satisfactory, cheating cunt embarrassed, check, "stud" lost job and suffered physical pain, check. mother lost status, good. drunkenness is no excuse for cheating(actually equates to being raped), your fucking forty plus, idiotic to think cheating will make you feel 20s. Only looser "studs" brag about "conquests", usually if you need to get her drunk, shes a dog or its rape. pool dipping is great, reverting back to the 16-1700 , testing witches and faithfulness via drowing. The cunt has a choice, go away or face retribution, defend herself via sons dunking with a gun as schwantz posits, she goes to hospital for more than a 1 night visit.

If it had been one drunken moment in a bathroom there's an outside chance that I could see forgiveness... But this was well done, just wish there was more of the MC moving on. The nailing someone to the floor bit was too much. 4/5

Read it again and I still enjoy it!

I agree that nailing his foot with an air gun was a little off. Should have been his balls. 5*

Read it again. It still makes me laugh.

Hank got 'Nailed'! 5 stars Plus!

Interesting story but, of course, it's total fantasy with no connection to the real world.

What's wrong with fantasy???

We all know this is a fictional tale.

Love it! Hilarious that she got repeatedly thrown into the pool by her son.

So refreshing not having the sickly-saintly husband extolling the virtues of the cheating slut to the kids "she nursed you when you were sick" 🤮

Five stars

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Nice that the father shared the PI report with the kids to show what the wife/mother was doing, unlike other stupid stories where the father tells the kids to respect the cheating slut wife

Loved it. Cheating bitch got what she had coming to her. Loved the son dumping her into the pool as well.

Very underrated story. Never have understood why the husbands in so many of these LW cheating wives stories go out of their way to white wash things for their kids. Young kids, 5, 6, 8 years old, I get it, but teenagers? No. They’re old enough and smart enough to tell the truth to, all the truth. Finally a little realism in a cheating wives divorce story. Thanks,

moreandmore, for a great one. 5⭐️s.

Some novel concepts here. No ridiculous delaying. No telling kiddies to respect mom and treat her nice, she I the mom after all. Just straight up dealing with and addressing the issue. It is an idea wherein you are responsible for your own actions, a thought lacking in modern society. If u cannot do the time,don't do the crime.....

4 stars - yes, even at 12, I knew my parents were getting a divorce - the screaming at each other stopped.

Perfect. Exactly how a family should respond to a slut.

Matt forgot the soap in the mouth.

You nailed it with the ending!

The lack of waffling,agonizing, endless delay and of introspective misery was refreshing. Just get r done.....

I need to buy pool!

Love the nail gun...

Don't like hubby's and family's attitude

Very good story. Divorces are not funny. I've been thru one. Thee was no drama, no sneaking around. She just left no talk about the girls just said she would leave them with cause I could take care of them better the she could. She had no concern how the girls would take our divorce. She told me she wanted to go out and play around, that ended our talk, so much for marriage (13 years). It seems no one believes in promises anymore.

Looks like everyone in that family deserved each other.

I agree that she should pay.

However, she was drunk the first time.

After 25 years and 3 kids, she needs to explain her failure.

She lost a job, respect from friends and family, especially her kids.

Her parents...

I would ask her dad's thoughts.

Mistakes, vs contrition.

She made mistakes

Is she completely honest?

Is she totally, genuinely contrite?

To her credit, she recognized her error and put an end to it.

I would kick her out for 3-6 months and see if she can Earn her way back.

Matt was such a good son.

I'm with muttster on this one. Matt is the hero of the story!

Pool scene is Great !!! So is Massaging Lily and nail gun

FUN!

to jsch1947, "To her credit, she recognized her error and put an end to it." NOT TRUE; "It wasn't nearly as good as the first time." She still went for a 3rd romp. The drunk episode "might" have been excusable but none of the follow ups were and those were the marriage killer. Good to know the "lover" got his comeuppance too. rk

Sharon should have had Matt charged with assault,.

Matt is my favorite!

Im glad the kids were on his side. I've read many stories on here where the kids automatically take the cheating wife's/mom's side. No one fucks with Matt lol

"If you'd kept this quiet, we could have worked it out".

"If you'd kept your wedding vows we wouldn't have had to work it out".

Brilliant! I've read so many stories where the wronged party completely fails to come up with an adequate response to the cheaters protests but this one was spot on. Cut the legs right out from under her!

I thought the dumping-her-in-the-pool stunt was overplayed, though. It was funny the first three times he did it but then it got old. Great read over all.

Matt keeps throwing his mum to the pool is very funny!

@nitpic...shut the fuck up