All Comments on 'Just A Few Pumps...'

Beta moron, gutter slut trashy skanky for a girlfriend, the absolutely bullshit of the nonexistent 'BBC' and it's ludicrous, equally mythical effect on women, and you have this shit.

Please let that 'to be continued' be a lie.

No. 99.9% of guys don’t want to know, they would have her crap on the goddamn lawn.

This was about as erotic as watching paint dry. I actually fell asleep reading it, it was that boring.

Liked this story, next chapter should be hot as well. Hope Brandy feeds her boyfriend a sloppy creampie from her slutty pussy 😋. Five stars

Glad everyone is enjoying the read! I see that some are returning readers, I'm glad my story stuck with you. Thanks for the support!

- Remember, all a taco is is a tortilla folded in half, the rest is your imagination -

great

It's good to see some more feedback on the story! It seems you really like it! I think there is a way for you to "favorite" the story so you can read it more often. I think there is a button for it somewhere here. Someone your age might need help, but I'm sure the admins would love to assist! Actually, if you comment with a real profile I could go the extra step for my dedicated fan and involve the admins myself! No need to be shy :)

I will definitely be sure to add zombies in the next part though. You seem like a pretty accomplished writer. Zombies is a great idea, but don't expect any royalty payments from me haha!

Umm...no man who was pissed off would keep watching their gf, let alone let her in the house after realizing what was going on. Either the guy wasn't normal or it's an open relationship.

i think it is a lot of dribble for 1 when she arrived home he wouldn't let her in as for her friends where were they.my parents always said if you cant say something nice about someone don't say anything so I will say nothing

i hope there is a part 2 with some consequences to her actions and if not explain why the boyfriend shouldn't want revenge

for my punishment to her would be to send those video's to her parents family ant to all the people we knew just to show what type of woman she was

You grab the hose and drench the cunt, then forward the video to her entire family. Then you go back inside, lock the stupid bitch out, get drunk and start a new life the next day. Anyone who finds this even remotely erotic needs their head examined.

Oh and it's racist as fuck.

I love a story where the white girl gets BLACKED and the white boy feels defeated

2* for no followup

Is part 2 coming?