All Comments on 'Just a Friendly Rough Encounter'

very badly written with little or no sense of sentence structure

Anon, as an English teacher, I can tell you, you’re wrong in every word you said. You don’t use proper sentence structure, yourself. First, you must capitalize the first word of a sentence. Second, Badly doesn’t require an extra word to emphasize our meaning. Badly, stands on its own. Third, if you want a stronger word than badly, use one. Don’t add a weak adverb to the first weak adverb.

I’d say you are a horrible critic and should stick to reading and not writing.

Miss Dynamite wrote the story in a lovely style and stands as nicely as a BDSM tale.

"Anonymous

very badly written with little or no sense of sentence structure"

Thank you for your thoughtful comment. However, my editor and I disagree with your statement. And proper sentence structure requires an opening Capitalized word and a period at the end. But I do appreciate you taking the time express your opinion.

Got more than he was thinking he wanted

Wow. What an introduction to your characters. The intensity and fast pace was bewildering, in a haze of sexy attraction.

Could the writing have been clearer, or more correctly structured? Sure, but I had no difficulty understanding the flow of the story, nor the conversations of the characters.

I am thankful that you had him restate his intention to participate each time the intensity ratcheted up. I would have liked Her to confirm his participation, somehow.

Anyway, I hope you keep writing. It would be good to learn what happened in the morning.

Great story! I could imagine being there.

oh god i want to meet her

Excellent story, but very much in need of proofreading.

You are a delightfully ironic writer.