All Comments on 'Just a Jog in the Park'

by poison_alice

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
ConsideringConsideringover 11 years ago
intense and entertaining!

Great story! Intense build-up and the hint of a continuation leaves me wanting more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Not my favorite.

willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago
Ah-ha

I don't feel sorry for her in the least. She was cruel and pushed him to far and got exactly what she deserved!

XtreemLeeXtreemLeeabout 11 years ago
Awesome

Great story

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Okay to good

I know I am supposed to think the tease deserves what she is getting, but I don't agree. Let's see, assault, rape, kidnapping and that should be good for 25 to 40 if the judge is lenient. Well written but I just can't condone rape no matter what.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous