All Comments on 'Just a Jog in the Park'

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Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Okay to good

I know I am supposed to think the tease deserves what she is getting, but I don't agree. Let's see, assault, rape, kidnapping and that should be good for 25 to 40 if the judge is lenient. Well written but I just can't condone rape no matter what.

XtreemLeeXtreemLeeover 11 years ago
Awesome

Great story

willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago
Ah-ha

I don't feel sorry for her in the least. She was cruel and pushed him to far and got exactly what she deserved!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Not my favorite.

ConsideringConsideringover 11 years ago
intense and entertaining!

Great story! Intense build-up and the hint of a continuation leaves me wanting more!

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