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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I just didn't gel with how you conveyed dialogue. Quotation marks would have helped and meant you wouldn't be saying 'he said' and the like all the time.

MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFerabout 1 month ago

Hot and to the point. Howard seemed like my kind of guy.

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