by BigGuy33
Read this story a couple times. I'm sure my take won't sit with the BTB crowd, but I have issues with parents stealing kids away from the other parent and never letting them be seen again. But then having an Ex take my son away at 7 years old and me never having seen him since might be the reason for that!
Our system is broken. It's good we don't have more people acting out. We see women using guys as ATMs. We support malicious behavior in women. This is one of many negative outcomes. The destruction of the family is a way to conquer a nation without firing a single shot.
@gasperguy: I presume that you didn’t intend to raise your son to abuse his future wife. There are legitimate reasons to remove children from a parent, and the vile, evil, demonic plan of the mother and grandmother in this story certainly warranted it!
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Frankly, to ensure that the witches don’t try again with another man, and more children, the MC should have used his resources to “disappear” the villainesses, instead of leaving.
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ZK
Only in fiction. What about his army buddies? They all get off scott free? Kidnapping is a federal offense. No epilog. The wife and her mother were maniacal. The husband went nuclear. Not believable on both sides.
Could have been a great story, but boy did that get stupid at the end. Why go off and make it so unrealistic with all the superhero crap? Not even believable. Should have put it in the fantasy category.
It needs a follow up with one of your excellent romantic endings.
Pleeeease ??????