All Comments on 'Just Being Wolfy Ch. 02'

love the story please please we want more don't stop keep writing.

Brilliant - when is the next installament available. Can't wait!!

Really love the line of the story, but keep getting distracted by the grammar, it would be much better if you have it edited. Will be looking forward to the next chapter!

The grammatical mistakes are very distracting and make this hard to read. It is strange...it's almost like a totally different person wrote this chapter than wrote the first. The second reads like it was translated from a different language, as well. It seems like an interesting story, I just think that some editing needs to be done to polish it up.

Quoting: [The grammatical mistakes are very distracting and make this hard to read. It is strange...it's almost like a totally different person wrote this chapter than wrote the first. The second reads like it was translated from a different language, as well. It seems like an interesting story, I just think that some editing needs to be done to polish it up]

I know you meant well but I can't help but to feel hurt because you thought that I copied someone else's work.I could accept you commenting about my grammar errors but saying like I copied and translated it from another language is shocking for me.

First of all, the series belongs 100% to me.

Secondly, about the grammatical mistakes? I have to admit that English isn't my first language, it is in fact, my second language. I didn't want to admit it here but I figured, I'd better do some explanation to you guys...

I've already posted a number of the chapters a few days ago so I couldn't go back and re-edit it. I'll try to make sure that there's no or at least less grammatical errors :)

Thank you for your comments though! I really appreciate it!

Thanks for the voting too!!

P.S: I hope you won't get angry with me or anything. Thanks for pointing out my mistakes :)

I agree, you simply need an editor. I think that there are a lot of people on this site who volunteer to do that for other writers.

I can't believe you had them mate! WTF!!!!! I was hoping that Jerry would have to watch her and James get together. And her father is going to flip! Does this mean she will loose her rank? What is going to happen to her now? Oh please make it a dream! Please, please!

KEEP WRITING and DON'T MAKE US WAIT!

LOL. Yes, I think I will definitely find an editor but I have to say in advance that I've already posted a total of SIX chapters so the future editor and I will only be able to work from chapter seven onwards... Oh,I hope I won't dissapoint you guys in CHAPTER 3 which will be available for reading tomorrow (11 February 2009) I think all of your questions will all be answered in CHAPTER 3 suprisingly, it's as if you're psychic or something LOL... THANK YOU for commenting and voting!! :)

P.S: I'm sorry for any grammar mistakes from chapter 1 to chapter 6 - I will get an editor LOL

Even though your tenses change during the chapter I really don't mind. English is also my second language and I automatically change it to the right tense in my head. But I must congratulate you on a unique story. I'm looking forward to the continuation of this. :D

LOL. Actually I didn't realize that my tenses changed in the chapter :) Thanks for pointing it out! I'll try to be careful next time when I make a new chapter. I hope you'll love the next chapters! PART 3 should be available by tomorrow (11 February 09) :D

i love it, i love it, i love it...hmmm did i mention i loved it? lol we all make mistakes and i still think i got the main theme of the story (just so u know i had to go back and edit this comment lol)..cant wait for chapter 3 and on. KEEP IT UP!!

LOL :D thank you very much. I wish I know your name so I could properly thank you. I hope you'll love chapter 3!!

I love this story and I am so glad you already posted more than one chapter. I hate waiting! :-)

THANK YOU!! I hope you'll love the next chapter which will be available tomorrow. YAY!! I hope PART 4 will be available in the next day. I love all of the chapters but I personally like PART 5 and 6 better! I hope you guys will love it too!

Thank you!! :)

amazingly good :]

I'm enjoying your story. I like your characters and your storyline but you could improve the grammar and tenses. The way you phrase things can also make it difficult to read. Do you have an editor? If not, your story would benefit from getting one.

I just read the previous comments and saw that English is your second language. That makes perfect sense. It explains the odd phrasing and the tense switching and the grammar mistakes. You still would benefit from an editor but knowing you wrote this story in your second language makes it easier to forgive errors. Good for you for submitting. It takes a lot of courage. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

I love this one! Please write more!

Loving this story so far. Can't wait for more!

love love love it PLEASE continue!!! <3

Chapter 3 will be available today!! Yay!! Thank you sexy9887 and scaperdeage. I hope you guys will love the next chapter better!! :D

i find myself for the past 2 days waiting for the next installment i love reading your writing

Thanks for waiting!! Chapter 3 will be unveiled today! Hope you'll love it!! :D

LOL. No, I haven't got an editor yet but I will look for one once I've done writing CHAPTER 7 LOL.

Thank you!!

I think more chapters will be available in the next few days. Hope you'll love it!!

It's a good story, but you definitely need to find an editor. But if English is your second language, you're not doing bad at all.

Yes, it is my second language :) Thank you for VOTING and COMMENTING!!

Wow! What a really good story this is turning out to be. Excellent story. Keep up the great work.

I hope you'll love how the story will turn out!! More chapters are coming after this! Thank you for VOTING and COMMENTING!! :)

Gosh makes me feel like a teenager again. I love this story. Def. makes me a fan.

lol 'deep trouble' is definatly an understatement. i really enjoy our writing. i read this whole story in one sitting. i was glued from the beginning. please write more soon! Thankyou

ohh somebody is in trouble...love love this story...lol

are you :(

I love young wolves!!

I think your doing extremely well. Keep it up. :)

shes in trouble

I wish you had a better editor though. I love it but the grammatical errors are really distracting. Keep 'em coming!