All Comments on 'Just Deserts Ch. 02'

You write a mean story. Thanks for sharing.

Your ability to bring a real humanity coupled with the eroticism makes you a distinct stand out in this genre. Please continue this series, I can see Tony getting his face smashed in and Rose teaching Dorothy about some of the 'finer' things in life.

Thank you for your kind comments and for feeding me yet more ideas for a possible new story arch.

Why are there only 3 comments to this story? It's unusual. It's tender. It's quirky. It's satisfying. It's well-written. I'd have guessed there'd be a mountain of comments applauding its originality.

And only comment on the stories I don't like?

This wouldn't be one of those. It was fun,different, sexy and touching. It was nice that it came to a conclusion but I agree with the other poster that there is scope for more about this group. I fully expected the father to show up at Chelsea's club.

that's simple, it is too much trouble. But the thing is if we let the people that write good stories know that htey are . We get more good stories. FinalStand is one of the Best, I may not agree with some of his stories, but they are always well written, there is life in each character, even the scumbags like Rodney, or the poor girl caught up in his machinations.

This was great, but short just 2 chapters but it is complete, it had enough to keep me wet, an it challenged my mind, of course how much mind can a nymph submissive have you may wonder, That's okay people that love me know, that's enough.

Kyle and Sarah made me think of the song Last Kiss. Also this would be a million dollar movie.

They've all grow close but the tension between the three If them, especially rose and kyle, needs to be resolved. Can't wait for chapter three. Please don't make me wait.

Good but the revenge was a little anti-climactic. I was expecting two dozen hired felons to run a train on his ass , breaking him a leaving a tattered shell of a human being held together by the crusted cum of the dregs of the world.

Which desert? Sahara? Gobi?

Alls well that ends well.

A good story, a dark revenge story with touches of light at the edges.

Scores 5/5