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Click hereHer eyes drifted shut, and she had just enough time to hope that he kept his word and fucked her awake before she was lost, curled in the heat of his arms and the soft thrum of his heartbeat under her ear.
This is my all time favorite piece of erotica, I've found myself back to re-read at least once a year. So perfectly rough and sensual, I'm obsessed 💖
I don't believe he loves her. I just don't buy it. He raped, hurt, disrespected, and betrayed her. But it is her feelings for him that sold this for me. It is her perception that made this story hot. I wish though that she would run as far away from him as possible.
i both loved it and hated it
loved it due to the noncon,aggressive and possessive love of him for her
hated it for a lot of reasons
he betrayed her trust she is his best friend she cares about him
he bit her too hard and too often infact it was a lot of bitting from the very start which might have scared her to run off
he punished her with spanking followed by belt lashes(how can someone hurt their best friend who cares so much abt them for any reasons), brutal deepthroat laced with humiliation
he drugged her when he gave her water why was that needed at this point dhe was ready to fuck him
and then he while doing anal he asked her for trying dry anal when she was already scared as hell imagine telling any anal virgin about dry anal fuck later during her first time (she is his best friend afterall)
and then when she was already experiencing heavy pain from sodomy he keeps smacking her already injured ass to mock her pain and his victory over her submission to his dark desire
and the thing which i hated the most was the soothing and caring before and after whenever he was going to inflict pain on her
he never appologised to her he laughed at her when his cum came out of her ass after her sodomy he kept on mocking and spanking her in shower
what she needed was not a good washing of hair but some ointment for her sore ass and wrist and nipples and neck hickies
in all when he soothed and gave her whatever aftercare he gave her it felt as if a pedophile is grooming or conditioning a child about pain,shock and humiliation received during sex
he punished her for resisting rape how could she just give herself to him if had just a breakup and needed sex for a rebound that too with his best friend she cares about him and is unaware thst he had feelings for her
to me it felt as he only had lust for her he would have sodomised and raped het no matter what he knew she was naive innocent and probably has one sided feelings for him and he only took advantage
he had lusted for only anal sex with her
the whole lovemaking fantasy he told her was to keep her mouth shut and to confuse her he never intended to make love to her iy was supposed to be sodomy willing or non willing and nothing more
he kept on confusing her with all loveshit and half hearted aftercare
had she been aware of his feelings or had she been his bitchy ex i would have really love every single min (i am really a noncon fan trust me)
but she being his friend cares for him deeply ,the whipping ,deepthroat ,drugging and anal punishment with dry anal threat felt really wrong and i feel sorry for her even if she is too young to realise that he is taking advantage of her good heart and slowly turning her into his slut which he later will share with his friend once he finishes his dry anal fantasy
the only mercy was he used lot of lube and prepared her ass with really good anal play combined with orgasm (very hot for normal circumstances) and also making her fuck her ass on his cock instead of rutting her in first time
now please dont thrash me for criticising i know its a non con but it hasnt to be brutal considering they are best friends but i still find it hot but brutal
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