All Comments on 'Just Inside The Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Too short!

I'd love it to be longer! Also, I love the biting of the neck! If you could make some kissing or sucking sounds while you say that, it would push me right over the edge! Keep up the good sexy work!

EvilAmeyEvilAmeyover 8 years ago
That accent

It's what got me. Totally combusted.

All this need was a pair of rough hockey mitts and I'd have been done before the door closed

Pinkpeony101Pinkpeony101about 9 years ago
my favorite part ...

... is your breathlessness

... you can barely wait--and it's delicious

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
That was HOT

Loved that your orgasm at the end wasn't loud. Nice tempo and build-up of tempo, great fantasy and imagery.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
mm

So sexy

OhtakemeOhtakemealmost 11 years ago
Oh dear

Your voice makes me want your cock.

I want you to whisper on my ear and make me moan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yes, please!

I wanna be Allie!

DKmermaidDKmermaidalmost 12 years ago
Sweet!!

Very sexy : )

KikishoesKikishoesalmost 12 years ago
perfect

Perfect, quick morsel to get off to

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Writer and slightly evil guy from Canada who loves to tease, loves to excite and sometimes will play. I want feedback on my stories but I need inspiration even more. Can't wait for you to contribute ...