All Comments on 'Just One Good Reason -- Paris'

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Anonymousover 16 years ago

Loved the Backstory!!!

Thanks. Didn't expect the backstory of jas & Todd but loved it!!! If you ever get the feel, love to see the wedding and Tod meeting the family!!

galilly over 16 years ago

I think my monitor is actually smoking

This was hot. 'Nuff said.

mrskelley over 16 years ago

Thank You!!!!!

Thanks for the backstory...it was hot, and I liked reading how they actually got together!!! I agree, if you feel the need to write one of the wedding I would be interested in reading it...no pressure! LOL!

Anonymousover 15 years ago

Great story!

Loved it!

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Dialogue lacked something

The dialogue lack sensuality. It started out fine then turned out to be too crass and ghetto sounding. The story line wasn't bad though.

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