All Comments on 'Just One Kiss Pt. 02'

Really enjoying this series so far. On to part 3.

Cockswain.

Your writing style is great!

Great writing!

Darn let me kiss a woman

Again, you prove how sensual a single kiss can be. Wonderful!

Five stars, though I do wish Keri had invited Carmen back and things progressed from there.

Hot.

So erotic. The buildup is killing me! More, please! I wish I could write like you do. 5 Stars Plus!

So, reading your story and paying attention bothers you?

Buzzed?

A fair observation.

Playful and erotic, the tease continues! I love how Carmen is holding her own, and them some. Just great🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Oh fuck, yes, yes, yes don’t stop ! :)

Buzzed?

Again, super hot — and we’re only at first base! I really like the idea of what I think is going to be a comparison test between Carmen and Chris in the future.

Love what you’re doing here; the “second” kiss and more so damn erotic/sensual. Can feel the mild tension, not discomfort, just touch of suspense/erotic uncertainty in this perfectly titled piece. Love it.

There is something about 'THAT' first kiss, who it was, where it was, how it made you feel. And to a lot of us, it just started an everlasting thought, which went on repeat, "It doesn't make me gay." That may be true but some of us knew deep down how we felt.

I relived my youth for a moment. Thank you.

5 stars.