All Comments on 'Just ONE Month'

Nice job! I enjoyed it!

what doi i say? she is nothing but a slut whore, he's a worthless spineless wimp to have her do that

I think you have a decent plot outline, but this story needs a lot of work on spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Also, the dialog is not very realistic and there isn't any depth to the characters. Get someone to look over your work (like a volunteer editor) and give you suggestions.