All Comments on 'Just One More Fantasy'

by rachel_hirt

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kelsaffirmkelsaffirmalmost 13 years ago
rachel rachel reachling ... ah it hirts...don't sto!

what have you wrought in imagining - how vengeful will she be when the time to express her balancing competitiveness to re-align some sense of being a worthy adversary!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very good Rachel

Such a well done story. We well written, so many powerful fantasies. As a professional woman with some of those same fantasies, I felt her needs and desires. Loved every word.

dirt043dirt043almost 13 years ago
Awesome

Rachel that had to be the best story i have read in some time !!!! Looking forward to more of your work. keep them cummmmmmmmmming .

tarnished_knighttarnished_knightalmost 13 years ago
Well written,

Rachel. An exceptionally well conceived and erotic fantasy. Well done.

TonyZeeTonyZeealmost 13 years ago
I love your mind

It's a dirty one, that's for sure. Your mind, I mean. But your writing is lovely. Great story, I enjoyed it thoroughly.

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