by mtnman2003
I really enjoyed .... really really enjoyed this story.
As I have said before your descriptions are impecable...I am in awe of your writing..
I intend to recommend this to all..and you know, you really can help alot of writers out there who need to put a little of that "feeling" into their stories...like me...When you edit my stories, I always know they will be highly rated.
You da bomb, babe!!!!
~Honey
Very impressive work! I LOVE your descriptions, they made me feel like I was in the room! I know I wanted to be. *blush* Great job!
To be handled, abused and loved by the man in your imagination would be heaven.......how can we ever repay you for the intense highs you give us? You've got us, you know. You have possessed us, albeit willingly, and we want only to be kneeling before you, each of us hoping you'll choose "me" for playtime....mmmm so good...so soooo good.
You fucking litterally said "flesh" 39 times. Cant you find another GODAMN word!?! Get a thesaurus bitch. And yes I took the time to count it. If you think that's ridiculous, YOURE fucking ridiculous for not finding another word. It's that simple bitch. Other than that it was pretty good. :|