All Comments on 'Just the Six of Us Ch. 05'

Its been great so far and im interested to see what happens next between Mike and the rest of his sisters.

stories to be found here.

Thanks!!

When will the next chapter be up?

Chapter 6 7 will be up the 20th and 21st, respectively. I finished polishing chapter 8 and it was submitted late last night.

I promise, the hot sexy erotic stuff is coming, but the story takes precedence.

Thanks for all the feedback, i read it all and try and respond to all the email feedback.

Doesn't he ever have to go to the bathroom?

Yes, he does go to the bathroom of course. I know I narrate alot of what the poor guy does, but I can't narrate absolutely everything he does. The story would be way too boring, unless you like stories about a guy going to the bathroom and pissing.

I'm curious as to which of the sister's my readers think will go all the way with Mike first. Do you guys have a favorite sister yet?

I love how you are telling the story even if the eroticism isn't present, you are very focused on the story line which is more important.

poor mike has a bevy of dream girls for sisters, how should we pick. Though at the moment i'm leaning towards emma or sarah

It's been a while since I've enjoyed a story series as much as this. Your

style, pace and subtle humor works. Don't rush things... I'm looking

forward to many more chapters.

+I hope you plan on continuing this story. There is so much you could do with it. Hope it ends with a family fuck fest.

I like how this story is going so far. I think it will be a matter of time before one of them goes all way.

Wow Emma, Danni and Sarah, Sarah needs this the most and Danni might need incest even more now; while Emma is a dream come true. What a lucky man four beautiful women as a harem!

Jerry in Washington State, USA - I rarely am interested in reading brother / sister incest stories, but I'm glad I tried this one. You already have me caring about all the siblings and I also feel that all of them needs both the love and sex. I look forward to how you share Mike's love and lust with each sister. As I suspect you will do (as you have already partially shown), I look forward to Mike enjoying the differences in each sister as they share the love and lust.

This story keeps getting better and better. You have real talent for storytelling. Can't wait for the rest of the chapters.

I would have expected a more significant degree of concern for Mike from Emma. This story started out establishing they are close twins who can sense when the other is upset or distraught. Then in this chapter Emma barely makes much of a fuss or concern over her twin being beaten up and getting beaten up for their older, slutty sister who hates Mike prior to the almost rape. I would have expected Emma to be plastered closely to Mike and maybe even a little resentful towards Danni over the incident.

Toooo damn gooooood !!!

God just think, four girls, and one of them thinking she needs to repay some kindness.

i have been hard since starting to read this series....true erotica

thank you

It seems as if each chapter has a special phrase that sticks in my head. The "furry kittens in the brain" stayed with me this time--truly funny stuff.

Damn good man!!!! /keep it up!!

little walking breasts were back and they were beating him with tiny hammers. I killed myself laughing. I hope Beth and Emma are going to step it up with there brother soon. Sexy plain Beth needs him to shock some sense into her so she knows how beautiful she is. Great job so far My voice says I hope Beth walks in as Sarah is swallowing his cum. lol see al voices are naughty

This chapter had a little bit of sexual interaction between Sarah and Mike but, it was mostly about Mikes recovery and Dannis transformation into a more vulnerable person. Again you excel at the illusion of natural and making it seem like a real life situation.

No criticism on this chapter.

Keep it up.

Just shocked !!

Unbelievable good and erotic writing here.

Please keep it up.

Regretfully, I'm just now discovering your series. I am DAMN glad I found it though. Wow... I enjoy they way you've got me worked up. Can't wait to read more.

very good. just wondering but if there is only 5 of them why is it call "Just the 6 of us"?

Five siblings and the voice.

"it felt like someone had released a bunch of little furry kittens..." OMG.. That whole sentence is Epic!

....... OMG you are so good me and my bf luv this keep up the good work :)

Ditto what the last person said. I'm just now discovering your writing and it is incredible! As long as you keep writing you'll make a LOT of people very happy :-)

Wow, I've only just started but you my friend, are a writing genius, The way you described these girls at the start, brilliant, and how they are all getting closer, one after another, Great!!! I feel for him, i couldnt imagine staying SANE in a house like that, Who wouldnt have a voice like that while living his life?!

this is my second time reading through this series and it's amazing, very good, keep up the good work.

This is incredible, we finally get to see that flesh and blood run much deeper than sibling rivalry. Keep up the good work mate.

I want some of those kittens too. Blowing kisses to my brain.

third time reading thorough and its still amazing!

I have read this chapter 5 times and still want more WOW

Nobody really believes in romance and true love... until it happens to them. ^^

Romance and probability....what a fantastic plot!!!! What a wicked way of thinking and and what effective and TOTALLY entertaining writing ability! Hey...I'm all for the fantasy...yeah riiight....fan-ta-seee!!! Great job Sensai...you're the master.....It's your universe and I'm just a fucking happy Peeping Tom passing through!

So 5 chapters in I just wanted to say this is the best thing I've read on this site

Best story .

Absolutely outstanding.

2 sisters down 2 more to go I can image him with Danni she owes him something for him saving her!!!!!!!!!!!

This is an expertly written story, the kind that drew me to this site in the first place, with a lot of actual believeable elements and just the right amount of smut.

They should have called the police and got those jerks arrested.

Your story has successfully drawn me in to read more and more of it. You know how to weave humor, drama, and sexuality into a story so well. The only criticism that I have is that you need to proofread just a little more. There are just a few tiny omissions or wrong use of pronouns here and there. Other than that, this is one of the best stories I have read. If you were to publish stories of this quality, I believe you could make a very nice, comfortable living from it. Very, very well done!

As a brother I know I would have done the same thing with out thought and this has been great story so far successfully drawn me in

Just got onto this series, and enjoying it so far, The question above remains, though. Or did Sarah drink it down while I wasn't looking? Bodily needs aside, this has he makings of a great series. Lots of chapters still to go. May comment now and then.

see the only thing i would have done diffrent was i would not just knocked him out i would have beat him with in an inch of his life then got my sister and got out

That was so awesome of him to beat the shit out of those guys, even tho he got damaged in the process, but hesaved his sister, so thats good, all normal shit aside, u all have to admit u LOVED the parts where she looks into his eyes, a beautiful girl sucking in ur cock looks up at u with those beautiful eyes of hers, OF COURSE UR GONNA CUM, ITS SO GOD DAMMED HOT! Like holy shit

i want a sister like the new Dannica or even Emma. i would probably marry them both somehow in some manner.

I can read this withouth erotic stuff.

Genuine intimacy is good enough for me to keep reading.

Not that I wouldn't enojy it more with it.

Anyway nice writing.

Love the romance and sections between Mike and Dannica. It’s beautiful.

Great story, but can you say "emergency room" or "cops'?

Now it gets good great story and great writing love it

Excellent chapter, very nice indeed

5/5

So far so good. Well written. And I don't think I will get the image of little walking breasts with tiny hammers out of my brain for awhile. Hilarious. Enjoying the tale immensely.

love your writing!!!!!!!!!!!

Really enjoying this so far, the first chapter made me think of "Big Mouth" on Netflix