All Comments on 'Just the Six of Us Ch. 23'

I wrote to ya on your tumblr, but I figured I'd comment briefly here as well. This chapter rocked, as I said, and I think it was one of the best in the series, though that's merely my opinion. The two things that guy on tumblr mentioned as flaws, I pretty much agree with, and your response was great. Next time, I hope I can be more helpful, but this is the best I can do rite now. Excellent work! ;)

Seriously never want this story to end! Its the only series i have ever fully read on ere from number 1 to know and have finished it in less than a week! Please right more!

u really know how to give the story an about turn

just when i thought u were straying from your path, u hit me back in the face...

simply AWESOME!!!!!

p.s: please don't make us wait so long the next time..

yo man its been so long i hav been waitin for the 23rd story have to give it to you this series is one of THE BEST i hav read now don't keep us waitin any more and write the nxt chapter soon

Amazing as always, please continue to write and upload soon!

As much as I loved getting his memory back, I really liked submissive Mike better. Even if you aren't planning to build him that way, please at least include a scene of role reversal where he's tied up and assaulted mercilessly by his sisters.

I've been waiting for this a long while. I truly enjoyed this new chapter and hope for more to come. Keep it up!

this was awesome. loved the return of the voice

I'm so glad the voice is back and I hope mikes sisters won't be having sex with emilys dad or anything like that. I love your story and can't wait for chapter 24

When is Chapter 24 coming? I can't wait ...

Great to have a new installment. Thank you for all the effort!

I like the idea above.... Bad Beth tying up Mike for a night sounds like FUN!

Awesome story best one i have read please add more

i have just finished 1- 23, and found i could'nt stop reading it, but now we need to find out how he gets payback to the other sisters, these first 23 chapters were so AWESOME. I just have to know WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?????????????? .

you have to tell us man. awesome work

just finished reading all the chapters and i love it that voice is funny as hell

wish i had one! can't wait for the next chapter keep it coming

Could you please not let Emily's dad fuck mike's sisters because you'll ruin the best series in this category thanks

u know how to write a story dude! i thought that chapter 23 ended on page 4 and i was like NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! but then saw it kept goin for another page, i cant wait for the next installment! your giving nikki_2021 a run for her money =-P

Absolutely superb! You could have drawn the amnesia story out for another chapter, but you handled it just right, having the memories return thanks to Emily's carnal attentions to Mike. Can't wait to see how Mike repays the girls for all the torture they put him through. The whole "Temptress Beth" thing was very interesting. Could "Voices" run in the family? Keep up the good work!

Loved it, this is great. Keep up the good work!!!

I love this series!! Its all i read now. Keep it up. I almost died when i thought it ened on page 4!! Hope to see the next chapter soon

I read from chapter 1 all the way to here all in one sitting today! You are a magnificent writer and te next chapter cannot come fast enough!

I was so depressed when the voice disappeared, and NOW HES BACK IN BUSINESS!

Yeeeeeesss!!!! You are an absolute genius. Please continue, I seriously can't wait.

Waiting.... please post 24 very very very soon!!

I started to read this series and just couldn't stop. You are good thats for sure I was only depressed when I found the next chapter not listed PLEASE!! continue!

Thanks for this very well written story. It's been a lot of pleasure to read. You've set the right mood from start and all along I came to feel close to Mike and his sisters.

This has been an incredible series! I couldn't stop reading! Can't wait for the next chapter!

FUCKIN A!!!!!! AMAZING? HOPE THE NEXT ONE COMES OUT SOON

seriusly when will you put out the next chapter

Just don't leave us hanging,,,,,,WE WILL HUNT YOU DOWN and wring the rest out of you.

OLDED

MAN hearing voice again was the best part of the story.

Unleash this horny, perverted mad dog on these teasing minx sisters.

please dont make us wait again this long

All of these stories have been amazing, could not stop reading them once i discovered this string. Please dont leave us hanging and waiting too long it might kill all of us!

Like everyone else, I'm greatly looking forward to the next installment. The loss of The Voice really left an empty feeling in the world you had created for us. When Mike heard him scream "ASS" I almost clapped I was so happy and then when he finally broke free I could have kissed you. Keep up the awesome work!

This is by far the best series I have seen on this site. I would love to see this get published as a proper book when you get it finished. Hope to see a new chapter soon.- Kyon

You did a really good job. Finish the next one as soon as you can. A faithful reader.

It took a while to read every chapter, and when I read this one I was disappointed to find there were no more...yet. Don't stop...this has been one of the most erotic stories I've ever read and by far the best on this site. I've been so absorbed by this that I actually try to visualize what actresses would be the best for characters when the movie is made.

I absolutely loved reading this story please hurry with the 1next chapter!

i have read it almost 5 times plz be quick with next chapter

Well done you left us desperate for more as usual. Thanks!

These are incredible. PLEASE! Don't keep us waiting any longer!

your writing just keeps getting better... atleast please let us loyal fans know when to expect the next chapter.

Greatest story ever, please please please continue

Please write more, you are probably the best author in the world, i have waiting for a update, and been reading the whole story 3times

You my friend are a talented person, you need to write a book!! You a great writer, you need more stories! More stories

I loove this series and cant wait for 24!!! Please hurry!!! :)

Please continue writing more chapters. I finished reading the entire story yesterday and started it all over again when I was done. I like it a lot.

Keep going. I want to hear more about Emily and her daddy and Mike and his sisters. You are doing a wonderful job and I can't wait for more!!

The story is very professionally written, dont get me wrong i am not saying its not good, on the other hand its simply superb, what i am saying is that the storyline and the way it is narrated complement each other and make reading unstoppable, have read the series two times in the past week. hope the series never ends.

I honestly think out should keep going with this story continue to make more chapters such a great story I would hate to see it end like this

THANK FUCKING GOD THE VOICE IS BACK!!!

Please god give us 24 before 4 months. I realllllly can't wait that long bro

Bout fucking time the voice came back!

Dude, are you gonna keep writing? LOVE THIS STORY! Keep doing what you do, make sure you continue this series, SUCH A FUCKING CLIFFHANGER

pleas make new one soon

Finish it. This is gold!

Dude this is EASILY the best story I have ever seen here! I love it :) hope you get some more chapters out. I realize that this must take time to write, but you're damn good at it.

Glad to the voice is back!!! I've been reading your story for the past 3 days, easily the best I have ever read even better then the camp series. Keep up the most excellent work, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your talented story is undoubtedly one of the best I have read, and maintaining a great story storyline that has novel like qualities is what intrigues me to read on, and wanting more. I am comparing you to Jammy Jimmy's story "Threads: The Island" which is definitely an online novel. Your story has that same potential. Can't wait to read the next chapters. As a side note , in chapter nine you left your own side note for those serving over seas. I thank you for giving my brothers and sisters in arms a much needed distraction, as a vet myself, I can't tell you enough how much the comic relief Mike's inner Voice provides. Keep writing, never stop, until the last one us comes home. Thanks for sharing.

On page 3, when the voice made his "Ass" comment, I almost died. I couldn't wait for him to come back. I really enjoy the diverse characters, as well as the closeness Mike has with his sisters, even when he's getting kinky (Like with Emma). Bravo, and keep it up.

Ive reading this a few days now. Got a little bored Around chapters 15 - 16. But these are the stories i love best. With a backgroynd story, not just sex 24/7 lol. (authors like: barondesade). Seriously man this story should be published cover and all. It sounded like the perfect ending at chapter 23, like the voice is back with memory, what happebs next? Emily joins the orgy? :) . your writing is superb.

This was by far the best story I've read on this site ever!! It took me a couple of days to finish all the chapters but i find that, that time was well spent. I really hope there'll be more chapters in the future but if not thank you(Mentalcase), for writing this fantastically addicting story.

this has been a really fun story, and worthy of more development. You've left us wondering about emily, her dad, and the siblings. Keep up the good work.

really cant wait to see wat u do next :)and thanks for replying to me cant wait to read on :)tell us wen the next chapter will be released:)x

Alright, this is my first comment from the start, but I'll repair that when I re-read it all. But HOT DAYYYYMMMMMN I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!! PLEASe CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait to read more of this story!

Anticipation is killing me since Chap 23 was released Oh! so long ago. Keep up the excellent work.

this is 2 good to stop please continue...

This series is one of my absolute favorite series on Lit. Please keep it going if only to give it a proper ending.

YOU TOOK OUT THE BIT WITH EMILY THE SLEEPING INCIDENT AT HER PLACE!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

This was amazing but there needs to be more to it you can't just leave us all hanging on how he gets back at the rest and what happens to Emily. But I love it all of it it's a great and amazing read

I have read through his series a couple of times and I would really like to see more. There is so much left for you to write on. Looking forward to the rest

didnt this story used to have a part about emily and her dad but now it's gone? interesting to see that part cut out. was it because you decided not to take that avenue or because you would rather flesh it out more in subsequent chapters?

This story gets better and better with every Chapter. I hope you continue asap.

I just finished the series and let me tell you that you're an EXTREMELY talented writer.

This is a wonderfully erotic story. I'm glad you cut out the part with Emily and her dad. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck and Happy Writing. 5 stars!!!

LOVE THE SERIES....

EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER..

loved the way you made it erotic a times and make you cry at times,

Just finished reading through all the chapters and this story is now my favorite on the site. Hope its not too long until the next chapter. Thanks for the great read.

Oh my god! As soon as the voice came back (my favorite character), I started to cry! I literally had to get up and walk away so I could just burst with joy! Oh my god! He's back! :D

I just read all 23 chapters in one sitting.All I can say is this is the best story I have read on this site, I could not put it down.I am really looking forward to more chapters.

tnx

Don't stop there!!. I'm sure you have a couple of more chapters in you.

Goddamn, this is certainly one of the best stories series outthere!

Thanks for a great story. Keep a good work!

Hey what happened to the rest of the story? I would so love to finish this story. It is a wonderful story that had all my emotions running I love this story. Please finish the the next part.

Man am a big fan of writing was waiting fr this chapter and am dying for next one.HAY DONT END THIS MAKE THEM TO LEAVE TEXES AND LET HIM LIVE AS THEIR LOVER IN A PLACE WHERE NO ONE KNOWS THEM SO THAT THEY CAN DO THINGs freely and do let us know about ur new chapter

FLAAAAAAW LEESSS

This is one of the best stories i've ever read and all i can say is I WANT MORE !!!!!!!

Pweaase :)

P.S. The sooner the better ;) Love your writing!

Sincerly

T.A ;)

I really need more.more.more.more.

What can I say about this series. It is just full of twists and turns that make the characters come to life. I'm waiting with baited breath the next chapter. Mentalcase keep the great work.

Thumpher

Ki have read this before but when I saw another chapter I had to read them all over again! Please don't make us wait for the next one.

Kligol

And the prodigal son returns. You've got a lot of talent and your book has been a hell of a read. I've enjoyed watching it evolve. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Wish I had Mike as a brother... LOL

it may not be the usual love story we hear everyday, but at least we're sure it's not just sex for these siblings, (well of course the voice is a different case!). Keep it cummin, PLEASE!!!

i am enthralled mesmerised by the voice in mike's head .please post the 24thchap soon

.. I am addicted to this story! Please keep writing!

U rock and we all now it! now how long must we wait? Please continue already

This is awesme. Please make anoter chapter soon

more please

all 23 chapters are great!

This is the best erotica I've ever read! Don't stop!!! Best Story Ever Award!!!!

SO is this the last one or are there gonna be more? Cause this story rocks balls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more!

And hats off to the Mentalcase, for making it into an actual story not just nonsensical sex ... Although that doesn't suck, ahaha.

Awesome story, need more.