All Comments on 'Just the Six of Us Ch. 23'

Hey man,

I love your work. When's the next one? I really can't wait.

Man this story is great. I have to agree with the others, please don't stop!!

This is the best I've ever read on here, or anywhere for that matter.

Keep up the good work.

Alright, stop making us mentalcases as well and get the next chapter done!

This is obviously the last chapter and a damn good ending to a damn good story. Although I agree with everyone else that I would be extremely happy if you deciided to continue this.

Love all the chapters please finish chapter 24 been waiting a really long time

Waiting on next chapter.

In June you said 24 was done and would be submitted soon. So many questions. Even went to tumblr to see comments that said more of the same. Dude I'm a sniper by trade so I have what I'd like to think is a huge well of patients, but six months down and still nothing. While I don't get off on incest, I've read through your series, well I've lost count, but the comic relief your stories provide is a huge weight lightener. Even find myself able to smile and on occasion laugh. You realize how hard that is to do given my profession? Still, hope this is not the end of this series. Thanks for sharing the comedy. If you care to find who I am I'll leave you a feed back message.

I just wanted to say that i have just finished all of the chapters of this series you have submitted so far, and they are great. I really hope you continue this story for many more chapters, or at least until Mike gets his revenge on all of his sisters.

I think he is just finishing up the series and chapter 24 will be extremely long, hopefully.

Tell whoever is editing for you to hurry up...We have been waiting for forever for this next chapter...

Em is my fav top story

Killin' me.....love the characters, ready for ch. 24.

Excellent story!

That was an awesome story u r a master storyteller plz hurry with next chap

wanted to fall a sleep on page 2. long and boring!!!

MORE SOON!!

Awesome Story

I really enjoyed your story. The characters had texture and indepth personalities. Your story pulled me right in with it's believable dynamics. I got to the end and wanted more...... A great story. A really great story...

cant wait for the next chapter

man i really hope 24 is comeing soon. great story

Just powered through all 23 chapters in a couple days. Great story. I need to know how he intends to punish his sisters.

fuckin great

Dude if you're not interested in writing this story just end it so people can stop waiting.

i really hope you will continue the story. i'm not a fond reader but when i found this series i found myself hooker and spent multiple hours yesterday and read the whole series i was enthralled the entire time and i just want more i've been sitting here thinking and it's just driving me crazy hopefully you will decide to write more and give everyone who has read it more stories ty for writing all that you have already

I've been glued to "Just the Six of Us", even when I shouldn't have been ! I love the unexpected twists and turns of chapters 20 and onwards.

Your writing is excellent, well done for sustaining it over such a long period.

Dude please continue. It would be awesome if you could do 30 chapters

Please we need Ch 24 this is one hell of a story, I havent been able to stop reading it for the last few days I was hooked on Ch 1. At first I wasnt sure when thiings turned for the worst with the car crash but you have turned it round so much. Top Job Mate.

Cant wait to read more very soon.

You are a great writer and i love your story... had me on the edge of my seat with the memory loss. I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep up the good work :)

My GOD!!!!!!! yOU write one hell of a story......ENCORE ENCORE! !!!!!!!!!!! cant wait for the next chapter

There have been few stories I've read in my life that have pulled an actual emotional response from me and the only one from this site. I'm sad to see that you have seemingly shelved this epic. I'm sure I'm not the only one to urge you to please continue writing this awesome story.

Man that was great once I started reading I couldn't stop you had he hooked! I'm sorry you couldn't continue with it. But thank you any way that was fun

Just read that we should be seeing the next chapter to your saga any time now - really looking forward to it!

I finished reading your series twice, and I can't wait to read the next part! PLEASE publish it already! Can't wait to see the faces on the other sisters when they realize he remembers!

I can't wait to see what happens with Emily and the gang. I also can't wait for anal and a foursome or moresome. loving it!

dont make emma fuck some asshole for ur pleasure. keep all of them satisfied and may be give sarah and danii a baby as a symbol of love. it would be very disgusting if you bring in any new person or treat ur sisters like sluts or whores. keep this mind while you start exploring new ideas. hope you wont disappoint us.

I remember that there was a part where Emily fucks her dad in his sleep. What happened to that part?

this chapter tops everything i've read here at literotica

Man your history is just gold. its the best erotica and the build up is just right.

This is by far the best chapter of the best series on this site. You are a literary genius my friend!!!!!!!

I hope that you continue this story its one of the best I have ever read anywhere

Cant wait for Chapter24 and more

YOU IDIOT. YOU CANNOT JUST END THE STORY THERE!!!! WHAT DOES HE DO TO ALL THE OTHER SISTERS?? PLEASE WRITE CHAPTER 24!!

When is chapter 24 coming?

I want to read the planned revenge tactics on those beautiful sisters of Mike's!

I have you the wrong email it's actually blazin526@outlook.com

Please keep going it'the best story i've read and phew glad mike got his friend and memories back. Can't wait for the next chpt

my e-mail addy is wolf32452000@yahoo.com

The king has returned. All hail the king!

I was throwing my fist in the air with loud shouts of YEAH!!! and woke up all my roommates when he got his memory back. Dude I am so mad at how he lost his memory and thinking you were going to end it with him and Emily but the feeling of relief (not sexually) is subduing my anger.

Victory!

Woohoo!!!!! It's back, the voice is back time for some action

I left a comment on a previous chapter asking for a payback, he had better get some to those temptress's after what they did, even Danni deserves some payback after her teasing and involvement in it all too. Make sure he gets some sweet revenge on his sis'

but now whats going to happen with emily shes been so hurt and is still looking for her night in shining armour to save her to and after all shes been through i hope she can fing him in mike aswell.

I love the way you set things up. He needs an unrelated girl in his life to present a normal image to the world with. Emily, with her troubles/problems/inhibitions, will fit that bill just perfectly. Saw that one coming a mile away as soon as she revealed her past to him.

Well played, bro. Well played.

This was the best chapter yet. Please don't ever stop.

Having not read the other chapters yet, I predict one possible outcome which is Emily eventually sleeping with her father.

And now i've let out my first cheer upon reading erotica when Mike got his memory back, so stoked. I am so invested in this story.

Welcome home ya sick li'l perv! I..WE missed you!! (sniffles and wipes a tier)

I smiled so hard when the little Mike broke out of the prison cell!

Hahaaaaaa i was so happy when Mike and the voice came back that i high fived my phone lmao. I also lol'd when the voice said "ass" that morning at emma hahaaaa. Well done author! Damn thats a great fucking story!

I'm so glad the Voice is back!! The dramatic irony of Mike not knowing that he was in very intimate relationships with all four of his sisters and didn't know it was torture!!! A shout out to the anonymous comment, I totally agree that Emily will end up with her father ;)

awesome story it totally worthy of reading more love the Voice being back and hornier than ever......

WELCOME BACK YAH SICK LITTLE PERVERTED MOTHER FUCKER!!! WE MISSED YAH

As a fellow writer you inspire me to keep writing! Even though I don't write about incest ( as much as I would like to). Also, I am not half as good but you make me aspire to greater heights! I love all the elements you include in your story that make it more than just a jerk off story although it IS a great jerk off story. I have been working on a story myself that maybe will end up this site eventually. If you would be interested in taking a look at it I would be, to tell the truth, honored. Keep writing bud!

If you want to get back to me my email is Peach_drillers97 @ live . com I also like to edit if ever you should need a new editor!!

Yeeeeaaahhh HE'S BACK!! I can't even think that this story having a happy ending if Emily and Mike will be together, I think it's better to be with her sisters, though. Looking forward to the next chapter to hear more from Mike's voice!

I'm glad he's back, but Mike's an Idiot!!! Letting them think his memory is still gone.

If that was me I would have told the voice to shut up, I would be telling them in the morning. Only bad will come of this!!

Damn. First I liked the idea that the pure and innocent Emily is back... but now?

If she would tell her father, he would probably go insane. Either kill himself, kill his daughter, kill her ex-boyfriend or them all.

And Mikes choice is a bit... well, I don't know. I wouldn't trash her away either, but I would at least be disappointed, hurt and disgusted... she told him that she wanted to wait until she is married!

She got fucked in every hole, from who knows how many, maybe 30 different men in a single night? That's disgusting and sexually transmitted disease can't be shut out either.

However, it's your story and I will continue reading. And since this was probably necessary for the story, so that she can accept the fact that he is fucking his four sisters; he got his memories and inner voice back and fucked Danni, I rated this chapter with 4 stars.

Still the best story on literotica I have read so far.

so ... hum .... wait

getting fucked by "30" guyz is disgusting, yet fucking 4 of your sisters is not ?

O_o

I bet you wouldn't have a problem if the protagonist had 30 women to stick his meat into ???

Imho, you should rather say that gangbangs ain't your thing which is fine. Everyone has different tastes. But even then, she's not spoiled for life

I mean alright, maybe putting your dick in a hole full of 30 men sperm is not that enticing to some people (not sure myself, never had the situation in front of me)

but the sperm doesn't stay forever & ever...

As for diseases since it's left to the imagination, just imagine that she did the tests & it turned out OK.

As for myself, the only thing which I think is not cool is that she was so drunk that she didn't really realize and latter regretted it. Otherwise as long as she had fun ... who am I to judge...

My favorite character is finally back

about fucking time its ben what a chapter and no voice or sex wow just wow how te hell did it end up as part of a sex story again?

My real problem with Emily is that she went from I want to wait till marriage with a guy she really liked to I am going to have sex with this guy I have barely met. That happened within the space of half a semester it sounds like. Then again I am just really angry for her, a shit bag throwing her away like that

So glad the voice is back but was hoping Emily would stay pure not become a fucking ass slut.

But damn! I was looking for a pornless wank once and found this so I read the first one and now, I'm fucking addicted. The Voice is a great addition to everything, the story is good, the characters are likeable, and it's really good overall.

I fucking love you!!!

THIS! IS! AWSOME!!!!!!!<etc>!!!!!!!!!!!

I was concerned about the way you were taking this series.

I normally wait till the end of the stories to do a comment, with this one I had to leave one, it was such a awesome come back, what you've done with the voice is so amusing, I find my self laughing at it.

This was a fantastic return to form for Mike! 7 chapters to go! Already sad haha.

...but I just wanted to add my own fantasy of how Mike would fuck with his sisters when his memory returned (well, at least Danni and Emma). I'm by no stretch of the imagination a writer, so don't expect it to be good. :)

Mike's memory returns... he decides to have some fun with it. Pretending he still can't remember anything, Mike lays down in bed, planning his next move. Danni enters his room shortly thereafter, slipping under the sheet and laying on her side, pushing her butt up against Mike. Grinning to himself, Mike turns on his side, spooning Danni and draping his arm around her waist. Purposely, he dwells on his sadness at losing his parents until tears come to his eyes and he starts softly sobbing. Knowing Danni won't take long to react to his sobbing, he quickly removes his arm from around her waist and rolls onto his back.

"Fuck!", he cursed to himself, just loud enough for Danni to hear. "What the hell is wrong with me?!"

Danni quickly rolled over, her eyes searching her brother's face. "Mike", she spoke softly, "What's wrong honey?"

"It must be brain damage" Mike said, more to himself than in answer to his sister's question. Turning to face Danni, he said, "I think I need to go back to the hospital."

"Why?" asked Danni, her concern for her brother plainly written on her face.

Mike covered his face with his hands, genuinely crying now as he thought about how much he loved Danni, but still intent on carrying out his plan. "I...I can't tell you. You'll think I'm a freak, or a pervert or something,"

On hearing Mike's words, a look of hope mingled with the concerned look on Danni's face. She really wished that her brother would start remembering the recent past. Danni reached up, taking one of Mike's hands in hers, gently pulling it away from his face so she could look him in the eye. "Mike, please tell me what's going on. I promise I won't think those things about you."

"I know you're my sister", Mike said, almost too quietly for Danni to hear, "But when I look at you, when I hold you, when I smell your hair... it feels like..." Mike trailed off and left the rest unsaid.

Mike could see that he now had Danni's undivided attention, and saw the look of hope in her eyes. He wondered how she was going to react to what he was going to say next.

"Feels like what, honey?" Danni said, urging Mike to continue. "Please, tell me." she said, the last words said almost in desperation.

"I think I must have some kind of brain damage, and I'm not talking about the amnesia, so please don't take this the wrong way." Mike said between sobs, dropping his hands but turning his head away from his sister, so he didn't have to look her in the eye.

"It feels like... you're not my sister, you're my wife." Mike breathed in a barely audible whisper. "No... not my wife. It's stronger than that. Like you're my soulmate or something". Let's see how she explains that, Mike thought to himself.

(That's as far as I got on that fantasy. Here's my fantasy for messing with Emma)

It was a Saturday, so Mike knew his sisters would all be hanging out at home today, at least for the morning, if not all day. After breakfast, they all retired to the living room, finding seats on the couches and watching TV for a couple of hours. Glancing at his cell phone, Mike saw it was nearly 11 o'clock. Time to put the next phase of his plan in motion.

He had purposely not been saying much all morning, and now he put a completely blank look on his face, doing his best imitation of someone in a trance. Emma was sitting with Beth on the other couch, for some reason taking Sarah's usual place. Mike slowly turned his head and looked at Emma, focusing his eyes on a spot that would be behind her head, both to maintain the illusion of being out of it, as well as avoiding direct eye contact.

After a minute of this, Emma couldn't help but notice Mike staring in her direction. Turning to face her brother, Emma said, "What are you staring at? You big doofus!" It was then that she noticed the lack of expression on his face, which caused her crooked grin to slip slightly.

Mike stood up, still staring at Emma, expressionless. He held this pose for a moment, then turned and headed toward the front door.

"Mike?" Emma said, louder than necessary. "Where are you going?"

Not reacting to her voice at all, Mike walked out the door, quickly hopped in his truck and took off. He headed directly to the local porn shop, which he knew opened at 11 on Saturday morning. Quickly making his purchases, he jumped back in his truck and headed home. 'This should get a reaction', Mike thought to himself, chuckling.

All four sisters looked up as Mike walked in the door. He seemed to be totally out of it, like he was sleepwalking or something. He stopped in the middle of the living room, his eyes staring blankly at Emma.

Emma tried to look in Mike's eyes in order to decipher what he was thinking, but he seemed to be focused inward. She saw his eyes drift down to her neck and stop there for a moment. Then she noticed what was in his hands. In his left hand he was holding what appeared to be a black leather collar, which had a leash attached. In his right hand he was holding a black and silver striped butt plug.

By this time all the girls had noticed what was in Mike's hands. Beth, Danni, and Sarah began to giggle, uncertain how to react to this new development.

Emma's eyes went from the items in Mike's hands back up to his face, while an electric sensation tingled in her body. "Are those for me, master?" She asked. Hoping beyond hope that the old Mike was back.

Mike continued to stare blankly at Emma's neck, and when he didn't answer after a moment she said loudly, "Earth to Mike! Hello?!"

That seemed to snap Mike back to his senses. She could see his eyes come back into focus, and he shook his head as if he was waking himself up from a daydream.

"Huh?" Mike said, looking back at Emma with a confused look on his face.

"I said, are those for me?" She said, pointing to the items in his hands.

Mike looked down at his hands, seeming to notice for the first time what he was holding. When he saw the butt plug, he jumped as if he had found himself holding a live rattlesnake, quickly dropping the items on the living room floor. Blushing, he ran from the room and upstairs to his bedroom, where he noisily slammed the door.

(That's as for as I got on that fantasy. Like I said, I'm no writer, lol) Hope you enjoyed it!

Fucking amazing

one of my fav chapters stil, love how the voice makes his cum-back. xDDD

You evil genius.

Memory loss and his ex coming back hometown?

It was a real torture. I was so anxious about what might happen that reading this chapter was really stressful. And really fun at the same time.

I'm really glad it didn't last a few chapters. I hope nothing but happy ending.

Thank god the voice came back with memory.

Poor Emily tho.

I hope you made a place in the heart of Mike for her in the following chapters.

I guess she is qualified to join the harem of Mike. Naughty enough

... My favorite character is 'The Voice'.

i so would love to have an Emma....or a Danni....

yummy!

sheer brilliance my friend!

Love the way the voice breaks out, every time I read it it seems so amazing lol. Keep it up.

I’ve loved this from the beginning. You’ve created a wonder. I’ve laughed, cried, scratched my head a few times, and most everything in between. I laughed like Beth when the voice returned a moment ago. This is a beautiful piece of work. Thank you for creating it and sharing it.

update, the 34th story man , I love this story ,sorrow fill my heart every time I think that this story gonna come to an end , I mean till the 34th story , I will reach there in no time.

Wow, great story, but needs some serious editing. Every time it feels like tripping on a root while on a fantastic hike in the woods.

So fucking hot and explicit sexual pleasures finally back where it belongs in the continuation of the story line. Love it. Thanks

jbgs51@gmx.com

Such a clever storey, but oh dear the spelling and grammatical mistakes are awful, you so need a proof reader. But I’ll still give it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thankfully, Mike got his memories back. I was afraid his amnesia would drag on and, hence, pretty glad he got them back in the way that he did (all at once). I'm kinda hoping Emily will 'help' her dad eventually (my terrible prediction #3). That would be very sweet and hot. FYI - my favorite character(s)? All of them. 5/5*

"The Voice"...IS BACK!!! He has been fighting to be liberated from his little room in Mike's brain, and finally broke through, at a moment that was crucial to Mike's whole outlook on his life!!

Emily...gonna add her to the harem??!! I think that she would fit well(I know, others are going to oppose this; she is "damaged' and not right for others...would be able to take TOO MUCH advantage of her!!). Mike and the sisters...healing is in their nature, Emily needs this help, and will be able to reciprocate if/when it blooms. Plus, acceptance is a necessity, and Mike has already accepted Emily's experiences; they ALL would benefit from her addition to the family!!

Again, I gotta say this...I think Ashley and Matt are intimate; if not, they are bordering on falling into each other, and they MIGHT also fit into the "family".

I know the rest of the chapters are written; your editors/proofreaders have not done you a real service, as grammar/punctuation/tense mix-ups are still prevalent, require going back and correcting A lOT of issues. You get Five (5) Stars from me...but this could easily downgrade to a (4), or even a (3), depending on future quality...JUST SAYING!!

🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌💥💥💥💥💥🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋💯

Oh, one more thing about Emily...Dad is lonely...are they gonna go there??!!

The return of the Voice is great, this story has lots of twists