All Comments on 'Just the Three of Us'

I liked your other 2 stories, but this one sucks... and not in a good way!

She has it with another chick in front of him, but he can't have it.

He only gets what he as a husband gets any way.

Turning him into spineless shit just doesn't rime with his state of mind early in the story. 1

wife cucked hubby. he only pleasured his wife, and the friend only pleasured his wife.

You didn't call my name!

Write for everyone. Second person stories never, ever work. You alienate all your audience.