All Comments on 'Just Trying to Get Home'

by TwylamarieWilson

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elling50elling50almost 6 years ago
Different life

You describe a life so very different from mine, and you describe it so very good.

Spadger2Spadger2over 4 years ago
Snowed in!

Well-written story, but without a conclusion.

One really is not in a position to make a judgment on the hitch-hiking young lady, as she seemed to be in a desperate position, and needed the protection and company of Rich, and the warmth and shelter he seemed to offer.

It would have been nice to know how Rich fared with the Law, and whether our hitch-hiker eventually arrived home safely.

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