All Comments on 'Just Very Good Business'

I need to remember when I see your handle to skip your stories. Terrible.

Pimping out your wife is a step too far for me. Selling her to someone else outright, even worse.

I liked it. I can see a lot of room for expansion. Is he getting big bonuses? Is she getting real estate or a Business

Expense condo and or car?

I liked it too although I am a bit jealous of Jessica. Maybe she shares. Amy

Oh, come on. Edit a little. Work on the dialog a little. This has potential but is just an outline so far.

If the dialog was any more wooden it would be called a tree.

Would love to see a part two describe her time with Michael abroad.

Company whore has been done much better. Your dialog is to stiff.