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"I think you're right," I agreed. We looked around the cemetery grounds and saw no one else around, so we made our way back to the car and silently headed for Las Vegas. As Ryan drove, I began to wonder what the future had in store for us. Whatever it was, I'm sure it would be very... interesting.
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Fade to black...
Note: Cameron Drake was the central character in my series, "Flash."
- COMMENTS
Justplainjeff16 days agoYou are one master storyteller Mr. Saddletramp. You ended this story very well.
Anonymous17 days agoOnly thing I can say is, that’s one helluva story.
Thanks, ‘Tramp, I look forward to reading about
Olivia and Ryan working with Cameron.
5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Dee
ncdeepdiver28 days agoI really like the intermingling of characters in your stories. When the characters in your stories are introduced for the first time and we follow them through their journeys, there is a sense of loss when the stories end. By bringing them back into future stories, we get to feel like they are still part of our present and futures.
scurvy4about 2 months agoGood story. I liked the additional development of the story line. It would be nice to have more on Olivia and Ryan.
There was one thing that bothered me about Anne/Anita's greed that was unrealistic. She would have wanted more. Here is (the rationalizations for) how it would come about: "I deserve half because I was the wife. It is Olivia's fault that I had to pay Papa Charlie, so that $10M should come from her. And the 10% (of now $50M) should also come from her. And Olivia should pay for the pain and suffering of me not getting my deserved share when Drew died. And, in any case she does not know how to spend the money properly. so all the rest should go to me to use it on things I deserve." In fact Anne would resent any money Olivia had already spent - clearly of Anne's money from her point of view. No thoughts of whether she herself deserved the money. No thoughts for anyone else. Greed, of course, is entirely selfish.
Anonymous2 months agoGreat story. But I wonder, is lasagna the national food of the USA? In all of your stories every one seems to eat only lasagna.
Anonymous3 months agoGreat series, ‘Tramp, thanks for sharing it here. I personally think this last chapter was the most interesting by far. Another commenter said something about a follow up story with Olivia and Ryan. I’d really like to see that too, so how about it, ‘Tramp, are ya gonna give your fans what we need? ;-) …5stars
Anonymous3 months agoWonderful story! Only one complaint... I can't find a sequel following up on Ryan and Olivia.
Anonymous5 months agoYou screwed up part 3 with the bitch Annie/Anita influencing or dictating Olivia's career but there was no justice for what Annie did to her husband Andrew and 8yr old daughter. I am reading the comments here before reading the story.
BGHillman5 months agoVery entertaining read. It makes me wish a lot of it were true! ( if it isn’t 🤪)
Anonymous6 months agoNever a bad story, You sir are truly gifted. Like sitting with an old friend and passing the time.
Will always select to spend time with your stories as their are posted over others. There are few really elite storytellers here and you are at the top.
I would put you in the same vein as J T Edson and Robert E Howard. Only Author I would put a little higher is Lous La Mour probably the best western writer all time.
Look forward to you next submission
Anonymous6 months agoI enjoy reading your stories. I'm a retired vet and have a wife that doesn't contribute nothing to the relationship. I outsmarted her when her and her lawyer tried to clean me out to pay for her and her dead husband's bankruptcy. I enjoy the stories since one can only dream of getting justice like this in real life
Anonymous7 months agoFrom OKS72:
ST has 5 titles on Amazon as e-books and maybe more on 2 other sites for sale including "Justice Rides".
Fjmax68 months agoAnother great read. You have great proof readers because I never see anything wrong. Although when I am reading something I sometimes automatically correct things in mind and never see the error but still great stories with great proof reading.
I am looking forward to more stories, I have bought your 3 books on amazon but have not read them yet. Also from reading a review below it sounds like you have been ill, I hope and pray you recover and get well.
Anonymous8 months agoThank you, I've been waiting for this one and it didn't disappoint. As to her bio mom being a complete psycho, there are enough cases of people hiding their true selves good or bad so thoroughly that it took a lifetime to discover their true nature, look at many political, religious and financial leaders who turn out to be complete scum behind the scenes.
Rage6328 months agoYou are making your own version of the Justice League/Avengers...
Can't wait for the next story!!!!
