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"I think you're right," I agreed. We looked around the cemetery grounds and saw no one else around, so we made our way back to the car and silently headed for Las Vegas. As Ryan drove, I began to wonder what the future had in store for us. Whatever it was, I'm sure it would be very... interesting.
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Note: Cameron Drake was the central character in my series, "Flash."
- COMMENTS
scurvy46 days agoGood story. I liked the additional development of the story line. It would be nice to have more on Olivia and Ryan.
There was one thing that bothered me about Anne/Anita's greed that was unrealistic. She would have wanted more. Here is (the rationalizations for) how it would come about: "I deserve half because I was the wife. It is Olivia's fault that I had to pay Papa Charlie, so that $10M should come from her. And the 10% (of now $50M) should also come from her. And Olivia should pay for the pain and suffering of me not getting my deserved share when Drew died. And, in any case she does not know how to spend the money properly. so all the rest should go to me to use it on things I deserve." In fact Anne would resent any money Olivia had already spent - clearly of Anne's money from her point of view. No thoughts of whether she herself deserved the money. No thoughts for anyone else. Greed, of course, is entirely selfish.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoGreat story. But I wonder, is lasagna the national food of the USA? In all of your stories every one seems to eat only lasagna.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoGreat series, ‘Tramp, thanks for sharing it here. I personally think this last chapter was the most interesting by far. Another commenter said something about a follow up story with Olivia and Ryan. I’d really like to see that too, so how about it, ‘Tramp, are ya gonna give your fans what we need? ;-) …5stars
Anonymousabout 2 months agoWonderful story! Only one complaint... I can't find a sequel following up on Ryan and Olivia.
Anonymous3 months agoYou screwed up part 3 with the bitch Annie/Anita influencing or dictating Olivia's career but there was no justice for what Annie did to her husband Andrew and 8yr old daughter. I am reading the comments here before reading the story.
