All Comments on 'Justin and Trent'

Now that's jock love bro.

Very hot. Looking forward to more.

Not a bad start at all, I can’t wait to read more but you seem to type of when you mean off and to when you mean too. Little things like that can jar the reader out of the experience. I do however look forward to reading more.

Trent and Justin do well together -- two sexy young men exploring each other, first in anger, hate, and jealousy, then later in developing love. Give one (or both) a bit of sexy chest hair -- something across the upper chest, around the pecs, maybe a treasure trail? It seems both guys have great dicks and are maybe moving toward sucking each other off? Keep going, it's great reading!

That's a great start! Two hot "straight" teenage jocks who can't hold back their lust for each other can never disappoint. I'd love if some of their teammates get involved in their exploration. Please continue writing this story!

You write really good stories but you leave them. There should be more to a lot of your stories. They would be so much better.