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Rosemary and I both nodded affirmatively. "You two have shown maturity around the house, and haven't been partiers, even when we were away and you could have tried it, which is why we thought you could handle this. Let's go home and get some rest tonight. We pick up your grandparents at 6:30 tomorrow, and it may turn out to be a long day, after a very long week."
"I'm so glad Grandma is feeling up to going with us! That will make the trip so much fun!" said Rosemary. "Grandpa too, of course!"
Mom laughed as she stood to leave. "Your grandmother said to tell you that if you don't behave up there she will move in and run the place right!" Now if we could have Grandpa and Grandma as "house parents," it WOULD be a fun place! Forget not being a party house!
When we arrived back at our house everyone split up for the night, and I headed for my room. I wanted to get a head start on a paper I had to write for Senior English. I plugged in Sibelius' symphonies, always good studying or thinking music, and started researching the web for my material when my door quietly opened and Rosemary slipped into my room, wearing only a thin, and well-worn, tee-shirt. She had never just walked in on me before.
"I didn't want to knock, just in case Mom or Dad heard it, although I think they are rather busy right now," she giggled and grinned. "I hoped you wouldn't mind, though. It's not like we have any secrets now, is it? I mean, what haven't you seen?" She laughed. "I might have caught you spanking the monkey or something like that, but I would have just had to help you."
I just shook my head resignedly. Her nipples were obviously excited about her being in my room as she was, and I found myself responding as well.
"I just had to see you. We haven't been able to be together since we almost got caught the other night. Quick thinking, by the way. Thanks."
"No prob."
Rosemary walked over behind my desk chair and draped her arms across my shoulders, and let her hands slide back and forth across my abdomen while her breasts pillowed my shoulders. Her chin rested lightly on the top of my head. "I can't believe we get to go up there together this summer to work on the house." She sighed contentedly and gave me a little squeeze. "I had to laugh at Mom asking you if you could handle living in a house full of college girls! I mean, what if they all ran around dressed something like this? You would just hate it, I'm sure!"
I lifted my head up to where I could look into her eyes. "How will you handle it? Stephie seemed to be getting under your skin earlier this afternoon."
Tears welled up in her eyes. I swiveled my chair around and seated her on my lap and put my arms about her, protectively. She buried her head in my neck and said quietly, "I'll handle it. I don't say it will be easy, but I'll handle it. I know I can't keep you to myself, although I want to. I just hope it is someone like Steph or Susie that I like and will let me share you. Not in bed necessarily, but seeing you and being part of your life." There was a quiet sniffle, and she went on, "That's why it is important to me to spend as much time with you as I can right now."
"That goes for me as well. Whatever guy is lucky enough to get you had better be someone who will let me be a part of your life, as well. I'll always love you."
"I wish I could spend the night with you. It just feels so right, with you holding me in your arms like this." She sighed, and snuggled her nose even more deeply into the junction of my neck and shoulder. "I don't even care about the sex right now, just feeling loved and secure." She lifted her head and looked me in the eyes, and then leaned in for a very tender kiss. "Think of me tonight. I'll be thinking of you," and she stood and walked somewhat unsteadily to the door before turning back toward me. "Thank you, Justin. I love you," and with a stealthy peek into the hallway she was gone. Suddenly, my room felt
so empty, and I was so alone.
- COMMENTS
ausvirgoabout 2 years agoRe Anonymous' comment on repeating things:
1. "the koala(we get it, they feel like its looking at them)" - this bears repeating, because it affects Justin's perving through the camera, and the changes in the dynamic - for example, Stephanie has finally let the Koala "see" her full frontal, yet Susie who's more exhibitionistic still hasn't shown her pussy.
2. Bose - Bose has a reputation as a top quality brand for sound systems, so whenever Justin talks about excellent or custom sound systems, which is a passion for him, it's natural for him to mention Bose.
3. "justin is such a great guy(we get that too, a lot)" - this is a key to how Rosemary fell for Justin, and also to how Stephanie and Susie are so accepting of it. Also, since Steph has an unrequited crush on Justin, and Susie is also attracted to him, it's natural that "Justin is such a great guy" would come up so much.
4. justin loves his sister and she loves him(god, we get it) - it's their first love, and a "forbidden love", so naturally it's going to come up a lot at this point in particular as it's a key theme of the story.
If everyone who posted such criticisms could write better stories for us, then Literotica would have way more great stories.
Oh well, if that anonymous critic is reading this, then from memory perhaps "My Sister Eva Started It All" would be more to your taste. It's a great story too, and the hero has lots of sex with lots of girls.
WretchedMonkeyover 5 years agoI know there will be occasions where you will want to miss out on some days due to inactivity but what happened to Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday? Justin's old teacher was meant to visit with his wife to look at his audio set-up at home on Tuesday (or Wednesday?) and nothing was mentioned about it or any other events. It was just suddenly Friday morning all of a sudden. You'd have thought that there would have been more happening in the intervening time what with the new relationship dynamic and the twins need for subterfuge around others.
Nevertheless, it's an enjoyable story, I was just puzzled with the quick jump and no recap.
Anonymousover 7 years agoHaven't read any further than this, so far, but I like what I've seen. Looking forward to the other chapters. Good character development, plausible plot and great feeling between the characters. Spelling/proofreading needs a little attention in places (to/too, etc.) but it doesn't detract from the story.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI've been reading this non-stop thru Ch 5, but it's late (1 PM) and I have to get up in the morning. A really goor read!
BobM
Anonymousover 9 years agoReally good and tempting like the development of the characters, it's realt nice to get to know them,
I like a good story with substance. 5+
Anonymousalmost 10 years agogod. this story is so Whitebread and boring. five chapters in and we've seen a handjob and two over emotional, short, and boring sex scenes. and has anyone else become annoyed with how literally every time Justin and Rosemary talk she starts crying? every time.
If the next one is like this I am out.
agarenabout 10 years agoyes i just found this serious this morning , but i cant STOP reading it...
yes, the author does keep repeating some things, but those things are there to help emphasize the underlying relationship
as for the finding other lovers...my ex wife did exactly what they are scared of. even though we lived in the same town as my family, i wasnt allowed to be around them
granted i dont, nor would dream of having this kind of relationship with either of my sisters, i can see wanting to have contact with family in general, and even more so if it was something like this.
my best friend happens to be female, and we talk about the same issue of finding someone that is ok with us being around each other
the lack of sex...makes a lot of sense story wise. the author states if you are looking for a quick jerk, look elsewhere. justin and rosemary are still living with their parents, and are in high school, so it makes sense they cant be rabbits unless they are alone. and having a relationship that is beyond just fucking is something that ..well i dont know about anyone else, but i at least dream of. sure i want to have sex with my lover, but i want us to have a relationship where just holding each other is enough.
Anonymousabout 10 years agonice build up but u seem to be still building. dragging it a bit. also u seem to keep repeating certain things: the koala(we get it, they feel like its looking at them), bose sound systems(r u a spokesman), justin is such a great guy(we get that too, a lot), justin loves his sister and she loves him(god, we get it). why is there more crying than sex? seriously. i guess the biggest issue i have is the repetations, its a bad literature tool. we end up skippping passages but its a great story
Anonymousover 10 years agoStill giving this a five! I do have two little points, well one little and the other pisses me off! Heh.
First, these two keep going on about how they just cant 'hide' their love around each other when others are in the room; I'm sorry, I call bullshit! ;) I know its used as a plotline motivator, but still. Maybe the girl cant? (Not a girl so cant speak from that POV) Certainly the guy could. His personality screams that he can! I've been in that situation and I can mentally flip the switch. I would have rather her confronted him later that night or the next day (say, when the parents were around needing to be fooled) and acuse him of changing his mind or... whatever.
Bigger piss point. They both keep talking about eventually having to find other lovers, understanding the slim chance of this being a forever thing, which I get, but then they are worried about the others partner 'allowing' them to share time etc. with their cibling. This is total passive bullshit. If my wife *told* me or tried to pressure me saying I couldn't spend time with my sister (only have brothers but for the sake of argument...) I would promptly tell her to go fuck herself and if she didn't like it she could pack up and move on. Sounds harsh but she got the whole package of nutjobs when she hooked up with me (and visa versa, OMG!) so thats the deal. If she couldnt accept the fact that I love my family and want to spend time with them then I married the wrong person and I *should* move on! :)
Anyways thats it. Other than that the story has done a really good job of being 'real world' as compared to a LOT of other stories and that makes it emmensly enjoyable!
Thanks and dont stop writing!!
M@
