All Comments on 'Kacee - A Beginning'

Excellent story! More adventures please

keep it up.

Glad they fixed the rift that was between them as it was a bad one, so many siblings do just that. There is something very erotic about the idea of someone knowing you all your life that is your love for ever.

Loved the story. If possible, could you continue on with this story?

Great story! Five stars

Only one comment, look up quite & quiet. You switched them.

Love it, please keep writing…

Great story, needs copy editing.

Learn to use contractions

For a first story (at least here...do you write elsewhere?) this is a great start. I love the brother-sister-friends-in-love thing...I kinda saw that from the start...the emotions on Kaceeçs part. Especially when Kurt was leaving, said all that ugly stuff..he should have seen the love she was hiding (Dad & Mom did!!)

Needs some editorial work...minor stuff...proofreading...

Five**5**Stars!!

Excellent story as others have said you need a good proofreader. As a former sailor I also would like to read their further adventures . “Old salts” usually have time to have hobbies such as writing good stories especially at sea, on a cruise. Looking forward to the next chapter.