All Comments on 'Kama Sutra: The Sibblings Position'

Almost 5 star but Luke's pathetic witterings about his girlfriend and his failure to do what Cindy wanted, when she wanted it, annoyed me a little. Good story but spoilt somewhat by Luke being a complete dickhead at times.

well done clear thinking adults.could actually happen

I liked it. His ramblings about his ex when he should have focused on his sister was annoying. But i also understoof his condition and need to focus on things.

Still a very good story and premise with good characters.

5/5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ great job.

Besides the awkward syntax and sentence structures, the badly executed dialogue, and poor word usage, you repeatedly spelled "sibling" wrong. Spell check is everywhere. Use it. It's not like it costs money.

WOW! 5 stars! Well written.

Beautifully written, tenderloin erotic

I thought this story was truly good. I liked the build up to the sex. I loved the steaminess of the description when she was lying back to his front. Please! do write more. I was totally entertained by this story!

@cageysea9725 may sound like a dickhead when you read his comments, but that does not change the fact that his comments do weigh their worth in gold.

@all: Thanks for the feedback!

@cageysea9725: Thanks, you are completely right with "sibling". Sorry for this misspelling, will correct it asap. Silly mistake, committed by a non-native speaker. My editor is innocent, I changed these lines after the last pass.

"Hot thrusts inside her, so good, but also just another squall in this cyclone that held her as tightly bound as a medieval instrument of torture." Some excellent writing. Enjoyed this immensely.

Very good descriptions. 5/5

Great build up between siblings.

More please 5 stars. Thanks. SCUBASAM

Amazing read and great build up to it! I look forward to reading more from you!!

OMG I LOVE IT PLEASE GIVE ME A BIT OF STORY AND TELL ME THERE'S MORE BETWEEN THESE TWO!

very beautiful buildup with amazing language expressing the situation. your description is flawless. it seems that you have researched well for this project. I liked every bit reading the piece. Thank you so much. you deserve 5star. all the best. :)

Absolutely one of the best stories I've read on this site. Thank you

I'm agreeing with that last comment: absolutely one of the best stories on this site. Super hot!