All Comments on 'Kamala's Mata & Baba - Story 01'

by DyannBridges

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 3 years ago
Exquisitely Beautiful

Almost an out of body experience for the reader.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Should had let her parents she watch them

DyannBridgesDyannBridgesalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Wow... @Alwaystaboo... what an amazing compliment. Thank you.

NellskitchenNellskitchenalmost 3 years ago

Via Story #1, DyannBridges takes the reader through her very own rendering of ‘Pictures at an Exhibition.’ You will ride the wind as she scatters ‘catnip’ for the ladies—shiraz for the gents. Do not miss this one – Nellskitchen

justwarped2018justwarped2018almost 3 years ago

loved it, amazing detail want more

EVSardisEVSardisalmost 3 years ago

Loved it and cannot wait to find out what Kamala saw when Esta told her to look closely!

DyannBridgesDyannBridgesalmost 3 years agoAuthor

@Nellskitchen @justwarped2018 @EVSardis - Thank you very much. I'm in the process of adding more stories. We'll see what direction Esta steers her in. :)

EroesEroesover 1 year ago

A unique and beautifully written story, with an almost ethereal quality to it. It is sensually descriptive and delicious. I appreciate that it didn't cross any lines that didn't need to be crossed, while retaining it's eroticism. There simply is not enough of this kind of writing out there.

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