All Comments on 'Kane'

Wow !... That was some story ! Great dialogue, epic character development, and a great twist as well ! keep up the great work!

loved every word...

It has taken me all night to read and really enjoy this brilliantly written story.

Like one of those books that you just cannot put down, must be the best on this site, would be more than 5 stars if possible.

Cheers.

Loved it.9849

I like the story plot but Tracey is annoying!

I couldn't get past the first page. Am I the only one who wondered why on earth the man was having sex with someone after he'd gotten shot in the head... shouldn't he have been in the hospital???

I enjoyed reading about Marcus and Tracey. While the rampant sex was a little overdone, it made sense considering Tracey's young age and the story flowed. Kane's motivations were natural, but I'd like to read where he remembers his past.

The decision by Tracy not to get medical care for Marcus bothered me too. He was trying to save a lot of questions about the dead men at the club. I gess it was just a graze.

This is my new favorite story! Great character development wrt Tracey. Loved Tracey's attitude toward Marcus, and with everyone else. While it would be nice to know if Marcus' memory comes back, it's outside the realm of the story. Going to look out for more stories from you.

Couldn't get past page 3. All I'm thinking is, oh yeah, this is "true love" (like hell it is).

The phrase "not to put a finer point on it", by the way, should read as "not to put too fine a point on it".

I loved this story. Love,love Tracey he/she was a force he completed Kane, the thriller part of the story was awesome,sex hot hot o so hot.

People please read this story

This was fun, a thriller with sex, what more can you ask for?