All Comments on 'Karen's Spa'

That's certainly a controversial viewpoint...good luck with that.

Is there a page 2?

One of the most common fantasies is the “rape fantasy” which is what was described in the imaginary scene between her, her boyfriend and an unknown woman. Translates as Consensual Non Consent.

In this scenario it appeared that the masseur raped the receptionist and coerced oral sex onto the customer. What followed after that was by dubious consent it could be argued that she was afraid to say no. Translates as Non Consent/ Rape. It’s unclear whether or not she genuinely wanted to continue.

So to clarify a fictional/ fantasy story of a “fantasy rape” - yep hot and sexy. This story was instead a fictional/ fantasy story of rape - all of the no.

Tess (UK)

Interesting. Hadn't realized Brexit would being with it the repeal of British laws against rape.

Is there a part 2? I just want to see how it turned turned out for her

Okay I wasn't going to comment until I read the seriously lame responses. What's the matter, you all jealous of actual writing and storytelling ability? Shut up if you have no useful feedback.

Personally, yes as a female reader I do see the rape fantasy as a turn on. Welcome to the 1990s, congrats you only have 40 more years to go before you are fully up-to-date with what they called "women's lib" in your bygone era.

Anyway. Idk why I am feeding the trolls.

What I thought was interesting was the twist whereby the masseuse had full authorization to move forward using force at client's request, while due to the mix up the woman was actually protesting. I wish the author would have played a little longer with that tension. It seemed rushed with the sudden appearance and submission of the receptionist. I could suspend my disbelief a lil bit easier for the dumb receptionist.

But overall well done. Especially compared to the comments lol and that sorry attempt to tie in Brexit? Omg 🤣🤣🤣🤣 again, let me ignore the haters. Keep up the good work English author! 👍👍

Thanks Anonymous for your feedback. I really appreciate it, maybe that section, was a little rushed. I tend to write in the moment and sometimes get impatient. As for the other comments I do get it. I really hope that nobody will be hurt by my story and hope that readers are able to distinguish between fantasy and reality. I think force fantasy can be a turn on for lots of women, but obviously in real life that's an assumption that nobody should make. I sometimes fantasise about having a million pounds.... it doesn't mean that I condone robbing a bank! Thanks everyone x

I don't know why people go to the nonconsent section if they don't want to read stories like this. What do you think nonconsent means??? A fantasy doesn't mean you want it to happen or that a woman would enjoy being raped in real life. These are stories. If it's not your thing read a different category. Anyway I thought it had a good start but would have preferred the whole receptionist part to be left out and just see where it goes from that point but that's just me

God that was hot. I would have loved him to fuck me. He is the best fuck I have read on any story site

just that... nicely done!

very wild - i liked the mistaken identity

Thank you for your comments everyone xx

Very well writtenwith graphic content, this story is HOT. Well done please write more

I really enjoyed this, it is one of my fantasies, but ive always been to shy to act it out, maybe soon.

I have read as author asked and do not agree with Non consent, even in fiction. Sorry I didn’t read it all once I realised.

what a great story.... i have to say i felt every feeling she had and also became aroused and wet wanting this to happen to me.. fuck i need more of your writing. thank you Kimberly

A very well written story with a premise I have not come across before. I personally do not agree with the way that force was used but that does not detract from the writing.

Loved this story, very well written, and original a five star

You know how to write

another great story for a nice girl... like me....

What happened to page 2?