by jsmangis
I have been so eager to see a new chapter to this series and I thank you for finally delivering it. I am a huge fan of this story but I noticed this one had a ton of typos in it and Richard changed to Carlos and back again, so different from your previous parts. Sorry to hear about your health and hopefully that is all behind you now. I hope you don't wait as long for the next chapter.
Starting at where Richard/Carlos sets the paper on fire with lighter fluid, it looks like there is a confusion of the same for Sophia's brother the karate enthusiast. Would love it if Richard/Carlos comes to Todd as his sexual sensei in order to improve his lovemaking skills in the bedroom with women.
This is a 5-star erotic literature story. Congratulations, this is the first one I have read. As an avid reader of incest stories, especially mother/son, I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I truly enjoyed the lack of gutter grammar. I appreciate the English language when used properly. I hope the rest of your works are as well written. Whatever it means coming from me, thank you for a work well constructed.