by redgryphon
This is a story so simple in it’s telling and simplicity it mimics the innocents of the story’s main character and in doing so makes it so endearing that you feel you are actually living the scene as if you were actually there as this scene unfolded it reminds of the primitive paintings of artists . This is such a simple story and told in such a simple form that it is Brilliant very well written story Bravo to the Author
you wrote that one just right, it was like what was happening to her was happening to me.... please keep the stories coming...
She was lucky to have someone that took care of her needs first.
We have all just about been there and at one time or another we wished we could go back in time and relive those moments of youth. Great short story and looking for more from you.!! Thanks.