All Comments on 'Kate Ch. 01'

Lovely story, well paced and well told

xoxo,

Di

A lovely erotic story, Hope that there is more to come from Danny and Kate.

Great story, nicely paced, with great characters and good descriptive sex. I sure hope we get to see more of this duo.

I love the dialogue, very natural. The characters are well written too. But... My question is Kate & Danny have been dating for five months (they even live together I think) and Danny hasn't until now mentioned she's trans? And Kate is like, "Ok, whatever, I'm horny" ? It's not something you're required to tell everyone you meet but for someone you're romantically involved with it's a must by the second kiss. It's not believable that Danny waited so long and if she did it's not believable that Kate wasn't furious.

You definitely didn't miss anything, their relationship and Danny's coming out is very exaggerated. The details of her private parts would in reality come up a lot sooner than it did in my story, (And they do live together) and with Kate being a lesbian not bisexual, she would definitely be furious.

Loving it so far, please continue when you can, thank you .. TG Tiffany